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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I straightened with a deep breath and looked at him.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I straightened with a deep breath and looked at him.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"You gonna stand there gaping or are you gonna check my shoulder?"<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"You gonna stand there gaping or are you gonna check my shoulder?"<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"I am a professional.  I ''never'' gape,” Arden replied, feigning affront.  “I focus intently."  He moved closer as he warmed the stethoscope with his hands and put the instrument's head on the joint in question.  "Okay, slowly rotate your arm..."<br>
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"I am a professional.  I ''never'' gape,” Arden replied, feigning affront.  “I focus intently."  He moved closer as he warmed the stethoscope with his hands and put the instrument's head on my joint.  "Okay, slowly rotate your arm..."<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;''Business as usual.''<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;''Business as usual.''<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;And the examination proceeded.  And while Arden was professional, I was fully aware he noted and enjoyed a pretty woman when he saw one, and judging by his reaction when I took off my shirt, he must have thought I fell in that category.  I tried not to think too deeply about that as he gave my shoulder the once-over and made a note to discuss it with Christian the next time he had me on his table.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;And the examination proceeded.  And while Arden was professional, I was fully aware he noted and enjoyed a pretty woman when he saw one, and judging by his reaction when I took off my shirt, he must have thought I fell in that category.  I tried not to think too deeply about that as he gave my shoulder the once-over and made a note to discuss it with Christian the next time he had me on his table.<br>

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