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==Kev's First Proposal:== 2001-2056 THE AGE OF GODS And so it began, a hole burned in time. They birthed a new age. Four years after the world changed, the Survivors awoke and they were dreams given form. Sixty Four tons of flying mettle and mass passengered by two hundred eighty three survivor souls, all alone to the world. After... no one would be exactly as they appeared, nothing stayed the same. To be a Survivor was to be a power unto yourself. For those that survived it became less about saving the world from the cartoon villain and more about making an impact on the world or rather how the WORLD would impact each soul. They were beautiful, the brightest of flames, giants on the playground. The surprise was that it became more about super-power than super-hero. This is the story of the survivors of the 9/11 fifth plane. The year is 2005. They are American Gods. * Jason's Commentary: <br> 1. It runs a little long, overall, and gets a little repetitive, esp. towards the end. You could probably stand to cut about 1/3 or more of it out without losing anything. <br> 2. I think it lacks a bit of the hard-hitting impact of the "HEAR ME SURVIVORS" and the repetition of the "you are Godlike." Of course, I'd have to hear you say it to be 100% sure, but saying it aloud to myself it loses a certain something. And I've got a pretty good delivery, if I do say so myself. <br> So, I think a cut-down version of what you have below, one which also takes the strong, gripping elements of the original that I mentioned above, would be a pretty keen way to start off our 4th story arc, when we hit issue #20.
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