Editing Midnight RPG - Chapter 12.24 (section)

== Bill / Kyuad ==

'''Kyuad:''' "The 'traitor orc,' who they also referred to as 'the pathwalker,' must be Durgaz.  Though from just hearing her, she could have meant 'pathwalker' in the plural, meaning all of us.  Surely they know we are here already - if not for the spying then for what happened below.  I did not realize that Durgaz could see through the Cadaverous Eye himself.  Maybe they refer to a potential ability and not his current practice.  Though from some of his 'visions' I could suspect either to be true.<br>"They referred to him as a pathwalker, as though that were an important distinction about Durgaz.  Perhaps he and 'the Vile have this in common... it would be interesting to see if anyone else were able to use the 'Eye.  We shall see, if given the opportunity.  Speak not of my suspicions to Durgaz, I do not want him thinking that I expect him to ''use'' this tool of wickedness.<br> "I will try to fill the time waiting on the others by trying to reference the stations and ranks these legates mentioned."

''OOC:  Kyuad's doing a Lorebook check on legate ranks and such, looking for what'' Harrower, Curate, Barrack-Master, Surgeon Knife, ''and'' Seneschal of Shadow'' mean for the legates and their purpose within the greater church.  Modifier is +11''

==== Other questions ====
Thanks a lot Kevin!  This is awesome!!
 
I edited some minor typos this morning, and again when I added to it just now.  I'm unclear about this portion however:
"''He toils his time with the stars, leaving before the initiates that are to become during HIS ritual on the moon. He twists in plots contending on meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall... ''"
 
Is she referring to the initiates as "the initiates-that-are-to-become" as a single long-winded term?  Is his ritual on the moon or is he leaving before the 'moon (as a shortened term for the New Moon or whatever phase that they understand as her meaning), which is when the ritual takes place?<br>
She said that his plots contend on whelps, which means "conflicting/fighting/rivaling on whelps."  I don't think this is a proper use of the word.  Should that be depending instead of contending?  Or should it be "contending with"?