Editing Reign of Drapetes (section)

==Geography==
The First Fled made a daring escape from the Slavers whose "city" was alive and resembled a mass of kelp and algae that occasionally grew a hard shell.  They managed to escape and traverse the Wiping Sea, a sorcerous body of water surrounding the Slavers Hold that caused disorientation, madness, and memory loss among humans.  They then fled inland and into the wastes.  Over the decades, the frequency of Slaver raids decreased, until one day, the Fled found an apparently uninhabited and calm shoreline on the other side of the continent.

(I think that it doesn't make sense that the Fled sailed away from the Slavers for decades I mean that is a lot of water to put between them and where they were held.  What about having them stop at an island and then resupply and build more ships and then the Slavers found them and they fled again?)