Editing The Southern Expedition (section)

==1st Day of Resplendent Fire: Just Another Night==
"I'll kill him myself."

Kitaru rolled over in his bedroll.  "He's just coping in the only way that he knows how.  We're all feeling the strain."

Li Jin shook the tent poles and shouted, "Shut up, you son of a whore!"

"He's..."

"I know what he's doing, and I don't care!  This is the first chance we've had to sleep in a week!"

"Have some compassion.  After what he's been through, he should be strapped to a bed in the Retreat for the rest of his life.  We all should."

"I hate him."

Outside the team's tent, in the driving rain, Cat-Eyed Dream screamed at the black sky.