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''- a village. All white little houses and trailers, Mexican-style buildings in organic little clumps. Children are playing with a dog in the street, older people lazily eyeing them from their perches in sunchairs andfrom  under the precious shadows of their sunroofs. Here and there, more of the huge cacti are growing. ''
 
''- a village. All white little houses and trailers, Mexican-style buildings in organic little clumps. Children are playing with a dog in the street, older people lazily eyeing them from their perches in sunchairs andfrom  under the precious shadows of their sunroofs. Here and there, more of the huge cacti are growing. ''
  
''There is only one thing off about the whole scene; everyone is masked. To a man, child and – yeah, even the street dog – they are all wearing brightly colored, individual Luchador masks. Other than that, it´s like every cliché you´ve ever imagined about that type of sleepy Mexican desert village.''
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''There is only one thing off about the whole scene; everyone is masked. To a man, child and – yeah, even the street dog – they are all weawring brightly colored, individual Luchador masks. Other than that, it´s like every cliché you´ve ever imagined about that type of sleepy Mexican desert village.''
 
''Well, with the possible exception for the large wrestling ring up in the center of the village, where the eye of the camera drifts. That and the huge circle of Aztec-styled totem pillars that surrounds it.''
 
''Well, with the possible exception for the large wrestling ring up in the center of the village, where the eye of the camera drifts. That and the huge circle of Aztec-styled totem pillars that surrounds it.''
  

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