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==== Background ====
 
==== Background ====
  
Song of Bronze was born in a brothel in Nexus.  Her likely trade, however, was denied her after an incident left her with a terrible scar across her face.  Instead, she took up playing the flute as a career, which she excelled at-- enough to catch the notice of the Unconquered Sun.
 
  
 
==== Description ====
 
==== Description ====
  
Song is tall and muscular, with brown skin, green eyes, and red hair.  She has an old scar across her face, and dresses in loose, baggy clothes.
 
  
 
==== Abilities ====
 
==== Abilities ====
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==== Feats ====
 
==== Feats ====
  
Luck  2
 
 
Fascinate (Perform)
 
 
Deep Ties (Honor/Obsessive Bravery)
 
 
Uncanny Dodge (Hearing) 
 
 
Dodge Focus 3 
 
 
Improved Initiative 2
 
 
Takedown Attack 2
 
 
Weapon Break 
 
 
Improved Block 
 
 
Improved Sunder 
 
 
Fearless 
 
 
Power Attack 
 
 
All-Out Attack 
 
 
Accurate Attack
 
 
Instant Up 
 
 
Taunt
 
 
Assessment   
 
 
Withstand Damage 
 
 
Improved Critical (Flute)
 
 
Attack Focus (Melee) 4
 
 
Rhythm of Combat
 
 
Leadership
 
 
Trance
 
 
Interpose
 
  
 
==== Powers ====
 
==== Powers ====
  
Mindshield 6
 
 
Enhanced Skill 3:  Knowledge (Past Life) 12
 
 
Immunity 2:  Age, Toxins (Half Effect), Disease (Half Effect)
 
 
Regeneration 4 (Disabled 1, Ability Damage 1, Persistant, Regrowth)
 
 
Environmental Control (Light) 1
 
 
Speed 1
 
 
Leaping 1
 
 
Protection 4
 
 
Emotion Control 10, Area (Cloud) (+1), Melee (-2), Sense-Based (Hearing) (-1), Selective (+1), Progression 2 (Area)
 
 
--Alternate Power: Glorious Solar Flute:  Strike 6, Mighty
 
 
Battle Form 7, Slow Fade 2, Full Power 
 
 
--Attack Flurry (Flutes)  4  (Interval 2, Max +5)
 
 
--Follow-Up Attack 6
 
 
--Impervious Toughness 10
 
 
--Enhanced Strength 4
 
 
--Superstrength 3
 
 
'''Orichalcum Flute:'''  Device 5, Easy to Lose, Restricted 1:  Solar Exalted
 
 
--Strike 7, Mighty, Penetrating (up to Str 20), Affects Insubstantial 1, Extended Reach 1
 
 
--Alternate Power: Fearful Blows of Retribution: Strike 11, Aura (+1), Selective (+1), Doesn't work with Grapples (-1), Hits users of melee weapons (+1), Requires a To-Hit Roll (-1)  ''The Flute spins and dances, striking back at all who dare strike at its wielder.''
 
 
--Alternate Power: The Golden Song: Stun 11, Area (Cloud) (+1), Selective (+1), Action (Full) (-1), Sense-Based (Hearing) (-1)  ''The flute plays a song that can entrance any who hear it-- even seasoned warriors in the middle of a battle!''
 
 
--Alternate Power: Music Touches the Distant Heart: Strike 11, Area (Line) (+1) ''The Flute grows to a fantastic size, hundreds of feet in length! It strikes and crushes anything in that line that can't get clear.''
 
  
 
==== Drawbacks ====
 
==== Drawbacks ====
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==== Complications ====
 
==== Complications ====
 
''--Obsessive Bravery.''    Song has a very, very hard time acknowledging that there are times when one should retreat. 
 
 
''--Haunting Memories.''    Song's memories of her life as a Solar impose on her at awkward times, causing various problems--- including the fact that she's a different gender than her previous incarnation.
 
 
''--Enemy.''    There's a Flame Dragonblooded that she's fought with before, and he's determined to get revenge, with the help of all of his family's resources.
 

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