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I ignored the telegrapher's white-eyed glance at my weapon as I accepted the message from his hand. I tore open the telegram form and read the coded message within, decrypting it as easily as I would read a newspaper.<br><br>
 
I ignored the telegrapher's white-eyed glance at my weapon as I accepted the message from his hand. I tore open the telegram form and read the coded message within, decrypting it as easily as I would read a newspaper.<br><br>
  
<span style="font-family: Garamond, serif; font-size: 16pt; color: #000000;">'''MULTIPLE ACTIONS IN YORK AND LONDON. STOP. BLACK KNIGHT TAKES BISHOP AT COST OF SEVERAL PAWNS AND A ROOK. STOP. NO FURTHER OPPOSITION INTERFERENCE EXPECTED. STOP. SELENE'S MOON HAS RISEN AND CASTS A BALEFUL LIGHT. STOP. PROCEED AS PLANNED. EXPECT FULL DEBRIEF UPON RETURN.'''</span><br><br>
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<span style="font-family: Garamond, serif; font-size: 16pt; color: #000000;">'''MULTIPLE ACTIONS IN YORK AND LONDON. STOP. BLACK KNIGHT TAKES BISHOP AT COST OF SEVERAL PAWNS AND A ROOK. STOP. NO FURTHER OPPOSITION INTERFERENCE EXPECTED. .SELENE'S MOON HAS RISEN AND CASTS A BALEFUL LIGHT. STOP. PROCEED AS PLANNED. EXPECT FULL DEBRIEF UPON RETURN.'''</span><br><br>
  
 
''Interesting''.<br><br>
 
''Interesting''.<br><br>
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"Will you be needing to send a reply, Miss?"<br><br>
 
"Will you be needing to send a reply, Miss?"<br><br>
  
"No reply." I paid the man a half crown for his trouble. "Thank you. Take care riding back."  I watched as the horse and rider retraced their path at a considerably more sedate speed, and I folded the message one-handed as I stood to cover their leave. The spy had said the Thule Society had wanted me dead in retribution for Rembecki's destruction and though I had learned some time ago what had happened to the castle at Lake Bled after I'd left for home, it hadn't sunk in until last night exactly how my reputation might have been made amongst certain clandestine circles. At the time I'd gone against Rembecki, I had been focused only on getting the job done. In retrospect, I had to acknowledge—for better or worse—what Hanny Saulnier's revenge would mean for my career.<br><br>  
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"No reply." I paid the man a half crown for his trouble. "Thank you. Take care riding back."  I watched as the horse and rider retraced their path at a considerably more sedate speed, and I folded the message one-handed as I stood to cover their leave. The spy had said the Societe du'Nord had wanted me dead in retribution for Rembecki's destruction and though I had learned some time ago what had happened to the castle at Lake Bled after I'd left for home, it hadn't sunk in until last night exactly how my reputation might have been made amongst certain clandestine circles. At the time I'd gone against Rembecki, I had been focused only on getting the job done. In retrospect, I had to acknowledge—for better or worse—what Hanny Saulnier's revenge would mean for my career.<br><br>  
  
 
''To say nothing of my continued well-being.  If you've had enough of making a target of yourself for the snipers in the trees, perhaps you should go inside and dissect the Colonel's message''.<br><br>
 
''To say nothing of my continued well-being.  If you've had enough of making a target of yourself for the snipers in the trees, perhaps you should go inside and dissect the Colonel's message''.<br><br>
  
I boarded the car by a different door than I'd left it and sought the privacy of my compartment. I'd drawn the shades before leaving for breakfast to keep it from heating up in the strong morning sun, and I was grateful for the concealment it provided. Settling in bed with my back to the headboard, I smoothed the telegram flat across my knees and read it again.<br><br>
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I boarded the car by a different door than I'd left it and sought the privacy of my compartment. I'd drawn the shades before leaving for breakfast to keep it from heating up in the strong morning sun, and I was grateful for the concealment it provided. <br><br>
  
''Hmm. Black means the opposition. Knight means spy. Bishop means mage. Someone's moved on a mage of our acquaintance. Who?'' No codenames of specific agents were used. That meant unknown subjects on the opposition side and non-regulars on the home side. Given the recent turn of events and the publically advertised reason my party was here, I had a hunch that it would be a mage relevant to the Avalon/Atlantian business we pursued. The Colonel would never have divulged the news otherwise. ''Which means it was Throckmorton. Is he alive or dead? Likely dead. The Thule Society strikes me as the take-no-prisoners sort. God, I hope he'd hidden the manuscript before they killed him''.<br><br>
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Settling in bed with my back to the headboard, I smoothed the telegram flat across my knees and read it again.<br><br>
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''Hmm. Black means the opposition. Knight means spy. Bishop means mage. Someone's moved on a mage of our acquaintance. Who?'' No codenames of specific agents were used. That meant unknown subjects on the opposition side and non-regulars on the home side. Given the recent turn of events and the publically advertised reason my party was here, I had a hunch that it would be a mage relevant to the Avalon/Atlantian business we pursued. The Colonel would never have divulged the news otherwise. ''Which means it was Throckmorton. Is he alive or dead? Likely dead. The Societe strikes me as the take-no-prisoners sort. God, I hope he'd hidden the manuscript before they killed him''.<br><br>
  
 
I made a mental note: ''Did B. lose bible?''<br><br>
 
I made a mental note: ''Did B. lose bible?''<br><br>

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