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He had spent the better part of two hours introducing himself to various people. Smugglers, mechanics, laborers...Val figured they were all good people to know if ''Delilah'' was going to run less than legal cargo some portion of the time. ''You never knew who might come in handy''. He had finally decided to settle for a minute and grab some food when he saw Vikki approaching in the distance.<br><br>
 
He had spent the better part of two hours introducing himself to various people. Smugglers, mechanics, laborers...Val figured they were all good people to know if ''Delilah'' was going to run less than legal cargo some portion of the time. ''You never knew who might come in handy''. He had finally decided to settle for a minute and grab some food when he saw Vikki approaching in the distance.<br><br>
  
Vikki found Valentine at one of the little food stations scattered throughout the smugglers' base. Nothing too fancy, mostly a table or a large overturned box with a thermos of coffee or tea and prepackaged foods like energy bars. Compared to the short rations she and the crew had been nursing, however, every station was a banquet and eating anything from it was a celebration. She nodded at Valentine and poured herself a little cup of celebration before saying anything. It was tea and it was still hot. She took a sip and sighed with pleasure. ''Bliss''. And then she got down to business.<br><br>
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Vikki found Valentine at one of the little food stations scattered throughout the smugglers' base. Nothing too fancy, mostly a table or a large overturned box with a thermos of coffee or tea and prepackaged foods like energy bars. Compared to the short rations she and the crew have been enjoying, however, every station was a banquet and eating anything from it was a celebration. She nodded at Valentine and poured herself a little cup of celebration before saying anything. It was tea and it was still hot. She took a sip and sighed with pleasure. ''Bliss''. And then she got down to business.<br><br>
  
 
"Sir," she said, keeping her voice low enough for privacy. "I think you need to read this." She pulled Sonia's message from her pocket and handed it without another word to Valentine. <br><br>
 
"Sir," she said, keeping her voice low enough for privacy. "I think you need to read this." She pulled Sonia's message from her pocket and handed it without another word to Valentine. <br><br>

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