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“Where was the vision? What was the vision? Can you be more specific?”<br><br>
 
“Where was the vision? What was the vision? Can you be more specific?”<br><br>
  
And here, words failed me.  Ezekiel had not the time nor I the presence of mind to ask for the details on the carriage ride over.<br><br>
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And here, words failed me.  Ezekiel had not the time, nor I the presence of mind to ask for the details, on the carriage ride over.<br><br>
  
 
“No, I cannot. You will have to get him in here.”<br><br>
 
“No, I cannot. You will have to get him in here.”<br><br>
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“Thank you,” I whispered. I pressed the towel harder against my head and breathed against the pain, and eyed the ogre towering over me.  He eyed me back and in that appreciative way men eyed women, making me all too aware of the state of my clothing.  If I’d been practically attired for the  mission—that is to say, attired in male clothing—I would not now be ogled by a constable-ogre whilst half-naked and bleeding. Again, the incongruity of it all was downright farcsical and had the situation not been so serious I would have laughed.  It was not the last of the surprise twists the evening, however.<br><br>
 
“Thank you,” I whispered. I pressed the towel harder against my head and breathed against the pain, and eyed the ogre towering over me.  He eyed me back and in that appreciative way men eyed women, making me all too aware of the state of my clothing.  If I’d been practically attired for the  mission—that is to say, attired in male clothing—I would not now be ogled by a constable-ogre whilst half-naked and bleeding. Again, the incongruity of it all was downright farcsical and had the situation not been so serious I would have laughed.  It was not the last of the surprise twists the evening, however.<br><br>
  
“You know, your dad's something of a legend,” I heard Phillip say.<br><br>
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“You know, your dad is something of a legend,” I heard Phillip say.<br><br>
  
 
''Legend? My father?  Truly?''<br><br>
 
''Legend? My father?  Truly?''<br><br>
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“I have a message for several … um ….” The pounding in my head was drowning out my words.  I tried again. “Sir John would like to see, in order, the Belgian Beignet and the Chartist …Drake.”<br><br>
 
“I have a message for several … um ….” The pounding in my head was drowning out my words.  I tried again. “Sir John would like to see, in order, the Belgian Beignet and the Chartist …Drake.”<br><br>
  
“The Hobbit?” Phillip shrugged. “Hell, I’ll heave him in through the window.”<br><br>
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“The Hobbit?” Phillip shrugged. “Hell, I’ll heave him through the window.”<br><br>
  
 
“Not before Sir John manages to talk to him.” I held out the napkin I’d cadged from Rembecki.  “This needs to go in with the Belgian, if you would give it to him. And I need to see the quartermaster.”<br><br>
 
“Not before Sir John manages to talk to him.” I held out the napkin I’d cadged from Rembecki.  “This needs to go in with the Belgian, if you would give it to him. And I need to see the quartermaster.”<br><br>
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“Yeah. Let’s go down there.”<br><br>
 
“Yeah. Let’s go down there.”<br><br>
  
I won’t bore you with excessive details of the next half hour. Suffice it to say, I was shown in to the surgeon and made to sit in a chair as he put five stitches into my abused scalp.  He was quick and efficient and I was so weary that I barely flinched from the pain of the needle and thread.  I was spared the ignominy of having my head shaved, for which I was more grateful than I could possibly express.  From there I was shown in to the Supplies Clerk who gave me attire as befitting a tradeswoman: shirtwaist, skirt, no corset.  I arranged to have whatever was salvageable of my discarded clothing to go to charity, but in truth I doubted they were good for anything but cleaning rags.  Still, one wasted as little as possible, even in these times of marvel and plenty. Economy was not only a good habit, it was a virtue. I was shown to a private room in which to change and freed of the damned corset and evening gown, I was able to move and breathe properly for the first time in what felt like days.  I made myself presentable and rejoined my escort outside as quickly as my head would allow, wondering what I would encounter next. <br><br><br>
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I won’t bore you with excessive details of the next half hour. Suffice it to say, I was shown in to the surgeon and made to sit in a chair as he put five stitches in my abused scalp.  He was quick and efficient and I was so weary that I barely flinched from the pain from the needle and thread.  I was spared the ignominy of having my head shaved, for which I was more grateful than I could possibly express.  From there I was shown in to the Quartermaster who gave me attire as befitting a tradeswoman: shirtwaist, skirt, no corset.  I arranged whatever was salvageable of my discarded clothing to go to charity, but in truth I doubted they were good for anything but cleaning rags.  Still, one wasted as little as possible, even in these times of marvel and plenty. Economy was not only a good habit, it was a virtue. I was shown to a private room in which to change and freed of the damned corset and evening gown, I was able to move much more freely and breathe properly for the first time in what felt like days.  I made myself presentable and rejoined my escort outside as quickly as my head would allow, wondering what I would encounter next. <br><br><br>
  
  
 
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