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Boameth did not cry as he spoke; he told his tale as one who had no more tears left.
 
Boameth did not cry as he spoke; he told his tale as one who had no more tears left.
  
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"The next year was a famine year, and my middle brother tried to steal bread from Alarun's keep so we could eat.  Alarun caught him, magicked him into a common crow, and baked him into a pie.  The year after that, my youngest brother came up with a plan to get a message outside the village, maybe to one of the Sun-Warriors that I used to hear about, far away to the west; but he told his plans to a girl he loved, and Alarun caught her and tortured the plan out of her."
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"The next year was a famine year, and my middle brother tried to steal bread from Alarun's keep so we could eat.  Alarun caught him, magicked him into a common crow, and baked him into a pie.  The year after that, my youngest brother came up with a plan to get a message outside the village, maybe to one of the Sun-Warriors that I used to hear about, far away to the west; but he told his plans to a girl he loved, and Alarun caught her and tortured the plan out of her."
  
 
"Then he caught my brother and put him 'on trial' for crimes against the King.  There isn't a real king; Alarun just put a paper crown on a scarecrow and used magic to make the scarecrow talk like a king.  Once the 'game' was over, the scarecrow changed back, but my brother and his friend had been burned at the stake."
 
"Then he caught my brother and put him 'on trial' for crimes against the King.  There isn't a real king; Alarun just put a paper crown on a scarecrow and used magic to make the scarecrow talk like a king.  Once the 'game' was over, the scarecrow changed back, but my brother and his friend had been burned at the stake."
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Invisible stagehands pull the curtains closed, and the lights in the hall begin to glow more brightly.  [[Sapphire River at Midnight]] frowns deeply.  "I do not like the way this tale is going."  [[Leaf Shakes the Wind]] shakes his head in agreement.  "Nor do I."
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Invisible stagehands pull the curtains closed, and the lights in the hall begin to glow more brightly.  [[Sapphire River at Midnight]] frowns deeply.  "I do not like the way this tale is going."  [[Leaf Shakes]] the Wind shakes his head in agreement.  "Nor do I."
  
 
[[Chokhan Fifteenth Son Shatters the River]] does not look at either of them, but simply says "You can leave, if you wish.  The tale will almost certainly get worse before it is over.  But if you leave now, you will never know."   
 
[[Chokhan Fifteenth Son Shatters the River]] does not look at either of them, but simply says "You can leave, if you wish.  The tale will almost certainly get worse before it is over.  But if you leave now, you will never know."   

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