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<br>'''11-15 motes:''' Here, John's form recedes into a rough sketch of a man; his hands, though, maintain every detail of their form.  He is surrounded entirely by shadows and darkness, but his aura glows blindingly bright, starting a few inches away from his body.  The echoes now almost drown out John's normal voice, and each observer hears them differently, as voices from their own memories speak John's words.
 
<br>'''11-15 motes:''' Here, John's form recedes into a rough sketch of a man; his hands, though, maintain every detail of their form.  He is surrounded entirely by shadows and darkness, but his aura glows blindingly bright, starting a few inches away from his body.  The echoes now almost drown out John's normal voice, and each observer hears them differently, as voices from their own memories speak John's words.
 
<br>'''16+ motes:''' Here, John is truly no more, replaced by his totemic form, the Sealed Oath of the Eclipse, enforcer of Heaven's Laws. His hands are the only thing that remain, having grown to a yard long and clasping each other in an unending handshake.  His voice is either entirely composed of the echoes when John speaks; when he speaks of order and laws, though, they are replaced by a deep voice of absolute command.  Around him, all deals are sacred and binding; those who would give their word casually would do well to reconsider, for if John hears them, then Heaven will enforce their vow, no matter what -- and his hearing is superb in this form.
 
<br>'''16+ motes:''' Here, John is truly no more, replaced by his totemic form, the Sealed Oath of the Eclipse, enforcer of Heaven's Laws. His hands are the only thing that remain, having grown to a yard long and clasping each other in an unending handshake.  His voice is either entirely composed of the echoes when John speaks; when he speaks of order and laws, though, they are replaced by a deep voice of absolute command.  Around him, all deals are sacred and binding; those who would give their word casually would do well to reconsider, for if John hears them, then Heaven will enforce their vow, no matter what -- and his hearing is superb in this form.
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<br>''edit:  Also, it has become clear that while the Sealed Oath's natural form is two clasped hands, those hands are not '''required''' to remain clasped....''
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<br>''edit:  Also, it has becomd clear that while the Sealed Oath's natural form is two clasped hands, those hands are not '''required''' to remain clasped....''
  
 
[[John_Palmer|John Palmer]]
 
[[John_Palmer|John Palmer]]
 
<br>[[AlphaOmega]]
 
<br>[[AlphaOmega]]

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