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"We weren't that lucky.  The Legion's Chuzei stepped out of the ranks.  She was a wisp of a woman with a fierce, proud stare, a small, clipped nose and high cheekbones tinted naturally blue.  Her hair was long and white as snow and whirled in a cloud around her head.  I didn't have to see her in action to know she was an air aspect.  She held her daiklave as if she'd been born to it and when she raised it in salute the wind whipped into a protective frenzy around her.   
 
"We weren't that lucky.  The Legion's Chuzei stepped out of the ranks.  She was a wisp of a woman with a fierce, proud stare, a small, clipped nose and high cheekbones tinted naturally blue.  Her hair was long and white as snow and whirled in a cloud around her head.  I didn't have to see her in action to know she was an air aspect.  She held her daiklave as if she'd been born to it and when she raised it in salute the wind whipped into a protective frenzy around her.   
  
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"If she hadn't learned as many Charms as she had, maybe Risen Fang would've won their fight, but the wind carried the woman's sword far faster than her arms alone could have.  It wasn't long before Risen Fang slunk away in defeat; I've heard he's set up in [[Great Forks]].  At least that mess meant our contract with Decelea was ended.   
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"If she hadn't learned as many Charms as she had, maybe Risen Fang would've won their fight.  But the wind whipped around the woman's sword and carried it far faster than her arms could have; it wasn't long before Risen Fang slunk away in defeat; I've heard he's set up in [[Great Forks]].  At least that mess ended our contract with Decelea.   
  
 
-- ''Leopard Chao, Commander of the Flying Spears Brotherhood''
 
-- ''Leopard Chao, Commander of the Flying Spears Brotherhood''

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