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"I think Eliza is better than her predecessor. How much better?" he shrugged "Eh? Not so clear, but certainly she doesn't burn houses down with kids trapped inside, not at least while I'm around to alter the outcomes. She certainly beats all the likely replacements around here."<br><br>
 
"I think Eliza is better than her predecessor. How much better?" he shrugged "Eh? Not so clear, but certainly she doesn't burn houses down with kids trapped inside, not at least while I'm around to alter the outcomes. She certainly beats all the likely replacements around here."<br><br>
  
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Renny Sighed. "Sorry, I didn't mean to raise my voice. On a completely unrelated note, would you be interested in staying at my place, at least for a couple of days? Lonya would love the daytime company and I figure Eliza's going to notice if you stay in a hotel."<br><br>
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Renny Sighed. "Sorry, I didn't mean to raise my voice. On a completely unrelated note, would you be interested in staying at my place, at least for a couple of days? Lonay would love the daytime company and I figure Eliza's going to notice if you stay in a hotel."<br><br>
  
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"I am. She would. Absolutely," Irina answered, by-the-numbers efficient. ''Stay inside your cover. Moscow Rules, Renny''. She slid another look at him with a genuinely warm albeit small grin. "Thank you." The car slowed and she whipped her attention back outside, reaching for her weapon. "''Target''." That one word encompassed a warning, a query, and a command.<br><br>
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"I am. She would. Absolutely," Irina answered, by-the-numbers efficient. ''Stay inside your cover. Moscow Rules, Renny''. She slid another look at him with a genuinely warm albeit small grin. "Thank you." The car slowed and she whipped her attention back outside, reaching for her weapon. "Target." That one word encompassed a warning, a query, and a command.<br><br>
  
 
Lying down in a bus shelter was the sickly body and pale aura he'd been looking for. "Look, over there. That's our mark. Let's go make his day."<br><br>
 
Lying down in a bus shelter was the sickly body and pale aura he'd been looking for. "Look, over there. That's our mark. Let's go make his day."<br><br>
  
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Irina checked her piece. ''Loaded. Back-up, too''. She swept the man on the bench with a look and completed her threat assessment. He looked damned sick but newly minted vampires were often mentally disoriented, emotionally unstable, and physically unpredictable: a trifecta for disaster if she were unprepared. Irina inventoried the bag at her feet from memory, leaned down, and pulled what she needed. "Remind me to hit a drug store for colloidal silver. I'm running low."<br><br>
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Irina checked her piece. Loaded. Back-up, too. She swept the man on the bench with a look and completed her threat assessment. He looked damned sick but newly minted vampires were often mentally disoriented, emotionally unstable, and physically unpredictable: a trifecta for disaster if she were unprepared. Irina inventoried the bag at her feet from memory, leaned down, and pulled what she needed. "Remind me to hit a drug store for colloidal silver. I'm running low."<br><br>
  
 
Irina rolled up her sleeves and got ready for work.<br><br>
 
Irina rolled up her sleeves and got ready for work.<br><br>

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