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==Appearance==
 
==Appearance==
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A bespectacled young man of pleasing countenance, Ayin often gives people the impression that he's something of an ascetic, with his long lean face and soulful expression. He very quickly sheds that guise when confronted with the prospect of temptation (either his own or that of others), revealing a predatory grin and eyes that glitter with nothing of human sympathy; something of a congenital weakness afflicts his eyes, and he affects a pair of ground glass lenses that correct his vision. They give his gaze something in the way of cool hauteur. He dresses simply more by necessity than anything else, having a terrible head for numbers and a distressing tendency to squander huge sums of money. This never appears to be a problem: for some reason or the other, Ayin is never short of friends willing to spot him some loose change (or their inheritance, or entire estate) in a pinch. His Exaltation has not radically altered his appearance except for his complexion: his skin bears the same burnished bronze tint as an agatae's carapace.<br>
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A bespectacled young man of pleasing countenance, Ayin often gives people the impression that he's something of an ascetic, with his long lean face and soulful expression. He very quickly sheds that guise when confronted with the prospect of temptation (either his own or that of others), revealing a predatory grin and eyes that glitter with nothing of human sympathy; something of a congenital weakness afflicts his eyes, and he affects a pair of ground glass lenses that correct his vision. They give his gaze something in the way of cool hauteur. He dresses simply more by necessity than anything else, having a terrible head for numbers and a distressing tendency to squander huge sums of money. This never appears to be a problem: for some reason or the other, Ayin is never short of friends willing to spot him some loose change (or their inheritance, or entire estate) in a pinch. His Exaltation has not radically altered his appearance -- the bisclavaret appear mostly human, after all -- except for his hair: upon close examination, his hair is composed entirely of homogeneous shadow, instead of discrete solid strands. The substance is permeable to the touch, although anyone touching it feels a slight resistance, and a pleasant coolness, as if they were running their hands through cool dark water. <br>
 
[http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b106/Torscha/4618337516d606efe6e6076fca2ecf6d.jpg Ayin, pondering Oblivion]
 
[http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b106/Torscha/4618337516d606efe6e6076fca2ecf6d.jpg Ayin, pondering Oblivion]
  

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