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<span style="color:#800000">'''''Many many thanks to Jim for describing the evidence at the scene for me. He did all the heavy lifting.  Thanks, Jim!--Maer'''''</span><br> <br> <br>
 
<span style="color:#800000">'''''Many many thanks to Jim for describing the evidence at the scene for me. He did all the heavy lifting.  Thanks, Jim!--Maer'''''</span><br> <br> <br>
  
''From Irina DiSanti’s journal''<br><br><br>
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'''Thursday, 21 Jul 2011'''<br>
 
'''Thursday, 21 Jul 2011'''<br>
 
'''US Post Office'''<br>
 
'''US Post Office'''<br>
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''Car. Envelope. In that order.''<br><br>
 
''Car. Envelope. In that order.''<br><br>
  
My rental was where I’d left it, parked in the lot facing South Wall Street. I got inside, turned the engine over, and cranked the AC on full blast.  I double checked the writing on the envelope. Neat block letters printing my name graced its front. As the car cooled down, I went through the contents. They were photocopies of the files on the murder string.  They did much to fill in what he’d dashed off during our interview and I glanced quickly through the pages. A note from Mayfield ordered me to keep the contents a secret from the Agency.  The Sheriff was keeping his cards close to his chest. Fine by me. He also tended to be thorough. A note on the Post Office attack had been included and I caught the address.  ''311 Main Street''.  Closing my eyes, I put it on my mental map of Natchez.<br><br>
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My rental was where I’d left it, parked in the lot facing South Wall Street. I got inside, turned the engine over, and cranked the AC on full blast.  I double checked the writing on the envelope. Neat block letters printing my name graced its front. As the car cooled down, I went through the contents. They were photocopies of the files on the murder string.  They did much to fill in what he’d dashed off during our interview and I glanced quickly through the pages. A note from Mayfield ordered me to keep the contents a secret from the Agency.  The Sheriff was keeping his cards close to his chest. Fine by me. He also tended to be thorough. A note on the Post Office attack that had been included and I caught the address.  ''311 Main Street''.  Closing my eyes, I put it on my mental map of Natchez.<br><br>
  
 
''That’s two blocks north of here''. <br><br>  
 
''That’s two blocks north of here''. <br><br>  
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I stepped clear of it and eyeballed the back wall of the building.<br><br>
 
I stepped clear of it and eyeballed the back wall of the building.<br><br>
  
It was brick like the front and sides, in muted shades of tan and grey. The grassy verge wasn’t very wide, maybe seven or eight feet deep.  The wall was close enough to get spattered by blood during the attack. The pattern seemed consistent with that caused by a short knife or several short knives, like a hunting knife or switchblade. One swath of blood seemed consistent with a large blade, like a hatchet or a cleaver.<br><br>
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It was brick like the front and sides, in muted shades of tan and grey. The grassy verge wasn’t very wide, maybe seven or eight feet.  The wall was close enough to get spattered by blood during the attack. The pattern seemed consistent with that caused by a short knife or several short knives, like a hunting knife or switchblade. One swath of blood seemed consistent with a large blade, like a hatchet or a cleaver.<br><br>
  
 
That gave me pause. A hatchet or a cleaver would leave a big hole in a victim, letting out a massive amount of blood. Looking at the struggle writ large in the rucked-up grass and mud, I could see the victim had been on the ground about four feet away from the rear wall of the building. So why wasn’t there more blood on the wall?  I looked up again. <br><br>
 
That gave me pause. A hatchet or a cleaver would leave a big hole in a victim, letting out a massive amount of blood. Looking at the struggle writ large in the rucked-up grass and mud, I could see the victim had been on the ground about four feet away from the rear wall of the building. So why wasn’t there more blood on the wall?  I looked up again. <br><br>

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