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Clustered in small groups around the main room, sipping wine and trying to look informed, the rest of the "right" people in town milled about, pinned in by the three lionesses of Natchez society.<br><br>
 
Clustered in small groups around the main room, sipping wine and trying to look informed, the rest of the "right" people in town milled about, pinned in by the three lionesses of Natchez society.<br><br>
  
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Caroline Thibideaux is not an unknown in this town. Her grandmother Cecilia Devereaux Hardin is one of the matrons of Natchez society, and her mama Mary Alice does charity work over at the hospital. It just so happens, however, that she's only recently moved back into town -- the gossips have it that her mama finally convinced her to come home from Atlanta. And all in all, Caroline's been pretty much out of the social scene for years now. But the invitation to the art gallery's shindig came at a time when Cecile couldn't come, and so Caroline is making the appearance for her family as any well-brought-up young woman should.<br><br>
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Caroline Thibideaux is not an unknown in this town. Her grandmother Cecile Devereaux Hardin is one of the matrons of Natchez society, and her mama Mary Alice does charity work over at the hospital. It just so happens, however, that she's only recently moved back into town -- the gossips have it that her mama finally convinced her to come home from Atlanta. And all in all, Caroline's been pretty much out of the social scene for years now. But the invitation to the art gallery's shindig came at a time when Cecile couldn't come, and so Caroline is making the appearance for her family as any well-brought-up young woman should.<br><br>
  
 
She comes through the door and pauses there, eyes slipping across the attendees, and Caroline is somewhat surprised that there are so few faces that she's personally acquainted with. Oh, a few here and there. But no one of much import besides the obvious -- the Cadre of the Cotillion. She takes a glass of wine off the tray and blends into the crowd some, hoping to avoid any matchmakin' mommas.<br><br>
 
She comes through the door and pauses there, eyes slipping across the attendees, and Caroline is somewhat surprised that there are so few faces that she's personally acquainted with. Oh, a few here and there. But no one of much import besides the obvious -- the Cadre of the Cotillion. She takes a glass of wine off the tray and blends into the crowd some, hoping to avoid any matchmakin' mommas.<br><br>

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