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Two events defined Terra's experience as a Starfleet officer: The loss of the first ship she served on, and the loss of her first captain. Both occurred in a single day. Both, she believed, could have been avoided. That the Romulan captain responsible for the destruction had long since been hunted down and brought to justice mattered little.
 
Two events defined Terra's experience as a Starfleet officer: The loss of the first ship she served on, and the loss of her first captain. Both occurred in a single day. Both, she believed, could have been avoided. That the Romulan captain responsible for the destruction had long since been hunted down and brought to justice mattered little.
  
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Terra learned much about survival that day, and much more about the value of diplomacy over a show of force.
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Terra learned much about survival that day, and much more about the value of diplomacy.
  
 
Still, for all the mistakes and what-ifs, she did not hang her head at the memory. She may have stood by while her young captain foolishly shook the saber at a superior and hostile force, but she did not stand by in the aftermath, and a number of people were alive that probably shouldn't be as a direct result of her actions.
 
Still, for all the mistakes and what-ifs, she did not hang her head at the memory. She may have stood by while her young captain foolishly shook the saber at a superior and hostile force, but she did not stand by in the aftermath, and a number of people were alive that probably shouldn't be as a direct result of her actions.

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