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"We didn't talk about our lives before Pasiap's Stair, much.  It was one of the unwritten rules of the school; whatever came before didn't matter, we were training for our futures as officers of the Realm.  Nekuto wasn't a patrician, otherwise he would've been adopted into one of the Great Houses straightaway and sent to the House of Bells, instead of ending up with us at the Stair.  But he didn't grow up on the streets like I did, either, son of a dockworker.  You could see it in his eyes; he'd had just enough privilege to dream of a grand life and just enough struggle to know it would never happen.  Not until he exalted, anyway.
 
"We didn't talk about our lives before Pasiap's Stair, much.  It was one of the unwritten rules of the school; whatever came before didn't matter, we were training for our futures as officers of the Realm.  Nekuto wasn't a patrician, otherwise he would've been adopted into one of the Great Houses straightaway and sent to the House of Bells, instead of ending up with us at the Stair.  But he didn't grow up on the streets like I did, either, son of a dockworker.  You could see it in his eyes; he'd had just enough privilege to dream of a grand life and just enough struggle to know it would never happen.  Not until he exalted, anyway.
  
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"Nekuto was more determined to succeed than anyone else in our fang; than anyone else at the Stair, probably.  Seizing his chance to realize those old dreams, I guess.  He didn't make fang leader until our third year - Meplit had a harder time backing down and I had an easier time with the war Charms, being Earth Aspected - but I don't think we would've made it to that third year if it wasn't for Nekuto.  He stayed up late with us to make sure we got the tactical principles we'd get tested on the next day, he was the one who went back to carry Verun when he'd fall, even though Bepof was stronger.  He was our heart.
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"Nekuto was more determined to succeed than anyone else in our fang; than anyone else at the Stair, probably.  Seizing his chance to realize those old dreams, I guess.  He didn't make fang leader until our third year - Meplit had a harder time backing down and I had an easier time with the war Charms, being Water Aspected - but I don't think we would've made it to that third year if it wasn't for Nekuto.  He stayed up late with us to make sure we got the tactical principles we'd get tested on the next day, he was the one who went back to carry Verun when he'd fall, even though Bepof was stronger.  He was our heart.
  
 
"They spilt us up after we graduated, of course.  I went to the twelfth near Chiaroscuro and they sent Nekuto to the fifth up in Cherak.  I mustered out when they put the legions under control of the great houses - I serve the Realm and the Empress, not a bunch of petty would-be kings.  Nekuto's probably still with it, though; I think about him carrying Verun and I can't imagine him doing anything else but leading troops."
 
"They spilt us up after we graduated, of course.  I went to the twelfth near Chiaroscuro and they sent Nekuto to the fifth up in Cherak.  I mustered out when they put the legions under control of the great houses - I serve the Realm and the Empress, not a bunch of petty would-be kings.  Nekuto's probably still with it, though; I think about him carrying Verun and I can't imagine him doing anything else but leading troops."
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"The Empress had left us by then, and I knew that the hounds in the Deliberative would soon turn their talk of house-sponsored legions into a reality.  I did what I had to - I went to meet Nekuto and offered him my daughter's hand and the name and patronage of my house.  I had him leading a talon in Harborhead not long after that.  Things went from bad to worse quickly, though, with Tepet's failure in the north and Cainan had to pull the wing back home in case things got worse still.   
 
"The Empress had left us by then, and I knew that the hounds in the Deliberative would soon turn their talk of house-sponsored legions into a reality.  I did what I had to - I went to meet Nekuto and offered him my daughter's hand and the name and patronage of my house.  I had him leading a talon in Harborhead not long after that.  Things went from bad to worse quickly, though, with Tepet's failure in the north and Cainan had to pull the wing back home in case things got worse still.   
  
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"But Nekuto wouldn't hear of it.  He'd had his first taste of action as a true commander and he wasn't about to go back to readiness drills.  Even though we might soon have needed him at home, I couldn't bear to bring him back to boredom so soon.  I arranged things with Cainan so that he could keep one scale, Hejek's, and continue on for a two-year tour with the local Wyld Hunt.  I hope that settles my boys down enough to let them rest at home a while - the vultures are starting to circle."
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"But Nekuto wouldn't hear of it.  He'd had his first taste of action as a true commander and he wasn't about to go back to readiness drills.  Even though we might soon needed him at home, I couldn't bear to bring him back to boredom so soon.  I arranged things with Cainan so that he could keep one scale, Hejek's, and continue on for a two-year tour with the local Wyld Hunt.  I hope that settles my boys down enough to let them rest at home a while - the vultures are starting to circle."
  
 
-- ''Cathak Caras, Senator of the Greater Chamber''
 
-- ''Cathak Caras, Senator of the Greater Chamber''

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