Editing Chance (Dark Champions - New Venice)

Alright. I have removed luck and replaced it with 3 powers (along with combat luck and a host of other values)

Martial Art Strikes (Punch/Snap Kicks) do 10d6 (at a cost of 3 endurance a hit)

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Suggestions:
Int and PRE are very high at 30.
IE a 15 is real world genius, and a 20 INT is max human. a 30 is four times that. 

I suggest lowwering both to 20, and redo powers:

30 Multipower 60  Only for Accedents +1/4  Activation 14< Side effect Unluck  
3 Mind Control 7d6 (Indirect)
3 Luck Blast 7d6
3 Luck Killing Attack  2d6 +1 (Indirect)
3 Luck Telekenesis (str 35)  (only for "accedients)
3 Slip and fall (as below)

End Reserve 80 (20)   Rec 15 (10) 
(This will last a looong while but when it runs out you "run out of luck")

10 Stun only for using luck powers (lets you use luck when down to -10 stun) (5 pionts)


80 Points

Later on you may look at bying overall skill level with your XP to simulate luck at doing everything.

See, I was looking at the high levels of Pre and Int as genius reached by other means.  He had always been smart but now his thoughts just seem to flow along the right courses.
He had always been handsome and charismatic, but now he was just nearly all things to all people.   The idea was for him to seem the most human at first glance and end up actually being the least. Playing with the idea that he trade eyes with a God and that is changing him. And have him revel in that as a contrast to our grim/dark friend.  I'll definitely look at the multipower revamp though.   I though however, that the Luck Blast would have to have indirect since you didn't want us with beams and that most of the accidents would be coming at indirect angles. 

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The Energy blast is suppoed to be indirect I just forgot.


== '''DOH!!!''' ==
I found out wht Chance's stat were so high!

As you made him  is 353 pionts!

Stats 182
Power 59
Skills 85
Talents 27

TOTAL - 353

Sounds liek he needs some radical surgery.
I suggest the stats. I knwo you want to make him god-touch, but keep in mind its a low power adventure.




=Background=

Born Marcus Shelby to a rather unremarkable couple in London's East End.  His parents simply were not particularly remarkable or note worthy in anyway, which made them some of the best thieves in London's history.  They managed a number of rather brilliant robberies that to this day have not been discovered and managed to retire without being caught despite it all.  They lived modestly but comfortably on a fraction of their stolen funds, and raised Marcus along with his five siblings well in their own way.   Their children took to these lessons like fish to water, though each with their own style to it.   Marcus was the youngest boy and his twin sister Kathryn were something special indeed, as both of them were quite good looking and charming from an early age.  And under their parents careful guidance they learned to cultivate that as a key to open so many doors.  

As both a family and a crew they operated like a well old machine, but when his parents retired in full the siblings all went their own ways in the world.  Marcus had always had a grand streak of the Robin Hood (from whom the Shelby's privately claimed ancestry) in him and that kept him working with a far higher profile than his siblings, which is one of the major reasons that he stays out of Britain to this day.

=Character Sheet=
Chance


Player: Toras


Val Char Cost

15 STR 5

23 DEX 26

15 CON 5

15 BODY 5

18 INT 8

15 EGO 5

18 PRE 8

OCV/DCV: 5/5  20

MOCV/MDCV: 4/4 6



14 PD 0

14 ED 0

3 SPD 10

8 REC 4

40 END 4

30 STUN 5

12m RUN 0

4m SWIM 0

4m LEAP 0

Characteristics Cost: 121


Cost Power

24 Powers of Fate: Multipower(60pt Reserve),  all slots: Required Skill Roll(-1/2), Side Effect: Unlucky 5d6(-1)

2f Accident: Blast (6d6), Indirect(+3/4), (Active Points 53, Real Points 16, Roll - Playing with Probability)

2f Just the Right Words: Mind Control (8d6), No Endurance, (Active Points 60,  Real Points 18, Roll - Persuasion)
    
2f Slip, Trip and Fall: Drain Dex(6d6), No Endurance, (Active Points 60, Real Points 18, Roll - Playing with Probability)

2f Fortunate Blow: Hand to Hand Damage (6d6), No Endurance, (Active Points 45, Real Points 15, Roll - Playing with Probability)

2f End of Fate: Killing Attack +4d6 HtH (Active Point 60, Real Points 18, Roll - Playing with Probability)

2f Mayhem: Telekinesis (STR 40), (Active Points 60, Real Points 18, Roll - Playing with Probability)



22 Warrior of Luck (+2 OCV, +2 DCV, +1 Speed, 22 Active Points)


14 Pool of Fate: Endurance Reserve (40 Endurance, 10 Recover)


Power Cost 72


Cost Skill

3 Acrobatics 14/-

3 Acting 14/-

3 Breakfall 14/-

3 Charm 15/-

3 Climbing 14/-

3 Concealment 13/-

3 Contortionist 14/-

3 Conversation 15/-

3 Disguise 13/-

3 Forgery 13/-

3 Gambling (Card Games) 

3 Lock-picking 14/-

12 Marital Arts (Martial Dodge, Martial Punch/Snap Kick, +1 Damage Classes)

3 Persuasion 15/-

3 Security Systems 13/-

3 Shadowing 13/-

3 Sleight of Hand 14/-

3 Stealth 14/-

3 Streetwise 14/-


Skills Cost: 72

Cost Perk

6 Wealth

Perks Cost: 6


Cost Talent

24 Combat Luck (12 PD/12 ED)

6 Striking Looks (Handsome)

Talents Cost: 30



Total Character Cost: 300



Disadvantages
20 Hunted (VIPER, More Powerful, Considerable NCI) -  Stole a considerable amount of untraceable bills to help fund orphanages rather than the weapon sales they were intended for.  

They are unamused by my antics.

5 Hunted (Inspector Malcolm of Interpol, Less Powerful) - A interpol inspector who I have evaded many a time on my escapades through Europe.  He has vowed to bring me in no matter the 

cost.  Unfortunately for him, he has no warrant for Chance or a man with Golden eyes.  

15 Psychological Complication: Overconfident

15 Psychological Complication: Defender of the Innocent

5 Negative Reputation (Frequently, Small Group of People)



Disadvantage Points: 60

Base Points: 300

Experience Required: 0

Total Experience Available: 0

Experience Unspent: 0

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''Flowing eyes are not foci, unless they can ne grabbed and taken away.''

''Only in Hero ID applied when the character has to change appear and/or costume or the power doe snot work.  Glowing eyes is just considered the visible effect of the power. Powers are assumed to have a visible effect unless brought as invisible''

''I took the extra points from "Warrior of Luck."''
''A 7 OCV and DCV before martial arts bonuses is pretty healthy.''

I thought an inaccessible focus was on that could be removed but can't be disarmed. They can be grabbed and removed, like a glass eye would be able to.  I could see how that might be a bit body horror.   I get what you are saying about only in heroic form though.