Editing Chance (Dark Champions - New Venice)

Took your advice on the powers and the stats.  Reduced stats down to your suggested level and replaced my power set with a multipower.  The focus present for the powers is those golden eyes of fate (magical artifacts rather than simply alternative organs, so they can be removed if he is held down like a glass set would be and people attempt to steal them to gain a portion of the power of fate)  His transformation is a magical one, inherent magical that hides the artifact and it starts pouring magic into Chance.  His eyes give off an unnatural glow and he is easily detectable via magical detection.  When he pushes his powers, gold nerves stand out all over his body.  

Gradually as he builds up his experience, he will buy off the Focus limitations to his power (at that point he will have fully bonded with artifact and integrate it into his body)  Until then, someone can still steal them without killing him.   


=Background=

Born Marcus Shelby to a rather unremarkable couple in London's East End.  His parents simply were not particularly remarkable or note worthy in anyway, which made them some of the best thieves in London's history.  They managed a number of rather brilliant robberies that to this day have not been discovered and managed to retire without being caught despite it all.  They lived modestly but comfortably on a fraction of their stolen funds, and raised Marcus along with his five siblings well in their own way.   Their children took to these lessons like fish to water, though each with their own style to it.   Marcus was the youngest boy and his twin sister Kathryn were something special indeed, as both of them were quite good looking and charming from an early age.  And under their parents careful guidance they learned to cultivate that as a key to open so many doors.  

As both a family and a crew they operated like a well old machine, but when his parents retired in full the siblings all went their own ways in the world.  Marcus had always had a grand streak of the Robin Hood (from whom the Shelby's privately claimed ancestry) in him and that kept him working with a far higher profile than his siblings, which is one of the major reasons that he stays out of Britain to this day.

=Character Sheet=
Chance


Player: Toras


Val Char Cost

15 STR 5

23 DEX 26

15 CON 5

15 BODY 5

18 INT 8

15 EGO 5

18 PRE 8

OCV/DCV: 5/5  20

MOCV/MDCV: 4/4 6



14 PD 0

14 ED 0

3 SPD 10

8 REC 4

40 END 4

30 STUN 5

12m RUN 0

4m SWIM 0

4m LEAP 0

Characteristics Cost: 121


Cost Power

24 Powers of Fate: Multipower(60pt Reserve),  all slots: Required Skill Roll(-1/2), Side Effect: Unlucky 5d6(-1)

2f Accident: Blast (6d6), Indirect(+3/4), (Active Points 53, Real Points 16, Roll - Playing with Probability)

2f Just the Right Words: Mind Control (8d6), No Endurance, (Active Points 60,  Real Points 18, Roll - Persuasion)
    
2f Slip, Trip and Fall: Drain Dex(6d6), No Endurance, (Active Points 60, Real Points 18, Roll - Playing with Probability)

2f Fortunate Blow: Hand to Hand Damage (6d6), No Endurance, (Active Points 45, Real Points 15, Roll - Playing with Probability)

2f End of Fate: Killing Attack +4d6 HtH (Active Point 60, Real Points 18, Roll - Playing with Probability)

2f Mayhem: Telekinesis (STR 40), (Active Points 60, Real Points 18, Roll - Playing with Probability)



22 Warrior of Luck (+2 OCV, +2 DCV, +1 Speed, 22 Active Points


14 Pool of Fate: Endurance Reserve (40 Endurance, 10 Recover)


Power Cost 72


Cost Skill

3 Acrobatics 14/-

3 Acting 14/-

3 Breakfall 14/-

3 Charm 15/-

3 Climbing 14/-

3 Concealment 13/-

3 Contortionist 14/-

3 Conversation 15/-

3 Disguise 13/-

3 Forgery 13/-

3 Gambling (Card Games) 

3 Lock-picking 14/-

12 Marital Arts (Martial Dodge, Martial Punch/Snap Kick, +1 Damage Classes)

3 Persuasion 15/-

3 Security Systems 13/-

3 Shadowing 13/-

3 Sleight of Hand 14/-

3 Stealth 14/-

3 Streetwise 14/-


Skills Cost: 72

Cost Perk

6 Wealth

Perks Cost: 6


Cost Talent

24 Combat Luck (12 PD/12 ED)

6 Striking Looks (Handsome)

Talents Cost: 30



Total Character Cost: 300



Disadvantages
20 Hunted (VIPER, More Powerful, Considerable NCI) -  Stole a considerable amount of untraceable bills to help fund orphanages rather than the weapon sales they were intended for.  

They are unamused by my antics.

5 Hunted (Inspector Malcolm of Interpol, Less Powerful) - A interpol inspector who I have evaded many a time on my escapades through Europe.  He has vowed to bring me in no matter the 

cost.  Unfortunately for him, he has no warrant for Chance or a man with Golden eyes.  

15 Psychological Complication: Overconfident

15 Psychological Complication: Defender of the Innocent

5 Negative Reputation (Frequently, Small Group of People)



Disadvantage Points: 60

Base Points: 300

Experience Required: 0

Total Experience Available: 0

Experience Unspent: 0

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''Flowing eyes are not focii, unless they can ne grabbed and taken away.''

''Only in Hero ID applied when the charcter has to change appear and/or costume or the power doe snot work.  Glowing eyes is just considered the visble effect of the power. Powers are assumed to have a visible effect unless brough as invible''

''I took the extra pionts from "Warrior of Luck."''
''A 7 OCV and DCV befor emartial arts bonuses is pretty healthy.''
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-Warrior of Luck (+2 OCV, +2 DCV, +1 Speed, 22 Active Points)
+Warrior of Luck (+2 OCV, +2 DCV, +1 Speed, 22 Active Points
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-''Flowing eyes are not foci, unless they can ne grabbed and taken away.''
+''Flowing eyes are not focii, unless they can ne grabbed and taken away.''
-''Only in Hero ID applied when the character has to change appear and/or costume or the power doe snot work.  Glowing eyes is just considered the visible effect of the power. Powers are assumed to have a visible effect unless brought as invisible''
+''Only in Hero ID applied when the charcter has to change appear and/or costume or the power doe snot work.  Glowing eyes is just considered the visble effect of the power. Powers are assumed to have a visible effect unless brough as invible''
-''I took the extra points from "Warrior of Luck."''
+''I took the extra pionts from "Warrior of Luck."''
-''A 7 OCV and DCV before martial arts bonuses is pretty healthy.''
+''A 7 OCV and DCV befor emartial arts bonuses is pretty healthy.''
-I thought an inaccessible focus was on that could be removed but can't be disarmed. They can be grabbed and removed, like a glass eye would be able to.  I could see how that might be a bit body horror.   I get what you are saying about only in heroic form though.