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As they rowed the boat up onto the shoreline, they realized that the earth itself was moving in sync with the humming sound, which was now loud enough to cause discomfort. As they stepped out of the boat, the tremors made their footing precarious, threatening to knock them prone if they didn't step carefully. The mist continued to swirl about them, and as it did so, they caught sight of a pair of lizardmen, much larger than those they had encountered the day before in the swamp. One approached them while the other turned back into the mist. As the remaining lizardmen neared them, he revealed himself to stand as tall as Jrak. With a sibilant voice, he demanded their purpose in a poorly pronounced elvish.
 
As they rowed the boat up onto the shoreline, they realized that the earth itself was moving in sync with the humming sound, which was now loud enough to cause discomfort. As they stepped out of the boat, the tremors made their footing precarious, threatening to knock them prone if they didn't step carefully. The mist continued to swirl about them, and as it did so, they caught sight of a pair of lizardmen, much larger than those they had encountered the day before in the swamp. One approached them while the other turned back into the mist. As the remaining lizardmen neared them, he revealed himself to stand as tall as Jrak. With a sibilant voice, he demanded their purpose in a poorly pronounced elvish.
  
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Wary of the imposing lizardman, the party did their best to mollify him. Leandrie sat down on the ground near the boat, while Trykaar and Aldur tried to extricate the party from a possibly hostile situation. Soon the second lizardman returned, bringing with him a companion who introduced himself as Captain Blackscale. Through the swirling mist, other lizardmen could be seen moving to surround the party, while two others maintained a guard over an opening in the tree into which a small stream flowed. It was from this opening that the bright blue light emanated, and they could see that the channel, large enough for a small boat to pass, was carved into the tree.
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Wary of the imposing lizardman, the party did their best to mollify him. Leandrie sat down on the ground near the boat, while Trykaar and Aldur tried to extricate the party from a possibly hostile situation. Soon the second lizardman returned, bringing with him several companions, including one who introduced himself as Captain Blackscale. Not impressed with the party's explanation for being at the tree, he informed them that they were under arrest and demanded they surrender their weapons. Fearful of the lizardmen, the party meekly acquiesced.
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Not impressed with the party's explanation for being at the tree, Captain Blackscale informed them that they were under arrest and demanded they surrender their weapons. Fearful of the lizardmen, the party meekly acquiesced.
 
  
 
The lizardmen led the party members up a precariously swaying stairway that climbed up along the side of the tree, to the lowest of the city's walkways above the fog. Proceeding cautiously along the trembling walkways, the city seemed empty, and they saw few elves. They followed a winding path that led from platform to platform, twisting around trees and occasionally passing through plazas that had been carved from the stumps of dead trees. Soon the captain stopped before a heavy doorway, knocking loudly with his ham-sized fist. It swung open to reveal a single, elderly-appearing elf, seated behind an orantely carved desk.
 
The lizardmen led the party members up a precariously swaying stairway that climbed up along the side of the tree, to the lowest of the city's walkways above the fog. Proceeding cautiously along the trembling walkways, the city seemed empty, and they saw few elves. They followed a winding path that led from platform to platform, twisting around trees and occasionally passing through plazas that had been carved from the stumps of dead trees. Soon the captain stopped before a heavy doorway, knocking loudly with his ham-sized fist. It swung open to reveal a single, elderly-appearing elf, seated behind an orantely carved desk.

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