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After a few minutes of burrowing, tossing, and turning, she lay still, listening to the sounds of the grain in the wind and the grass settling around her.  She tried to go to sleep, but her thoughts kept turning back on themselves, back to the events of the morning, to her empty stomach, to the dozens of nights she had spent like this before.
 
After a few minutes of burrowing, tossing, and turning, she lay still, listening to the sounds of the grain in the wind and the grass settling around her.  She tried to go to sleep, but her thoughts kept turning back on themselves, back to the events of the morning, to her empty stomach, to the dozens of nights she had spent like this before.
  
As the moon rose, the smaller denizens of the plains rose with it.  Mice made forays through the wilds, gathering seeds for a midnight repast, ever watchful for owls overhead.  A pack of coyotes yipped and barked to one another as they played by a stream bed, sniffing at the new tracks crossing their territory.  A passing gopher crept curiously around the mound of grass that had been erected in the field, pricking its ears at the strange, soft sounds that came from within, almost too faint to be heard over the gopher's own breathing.
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As the moon rose, the smaller denizens of the plains rose with it.  Mice made forays through the wilds, gathering seeds for a midnight repast, ever watchful for owls overhead.  A pack of coyotes yipped and barked to one another as they played by a stream bed, sniffing at the new tracks crossing their territory.  A passing groundhog crept curiously around the mound of grass that had been erected in the field, pricking its ears at the strange, soft sounds that came from within, almost too faint to be heard over the rabbit’s own breathing.
  
 
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