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She was not being enchanting at the moment, however.  Sitting opposite him she ate through an entire roast pig like a starving wild beast.  He tried to speak to her as she ate.
 
She was not being enchanting at the moment, however.  Sitting opposite him she ate through an entire roast pig like a starving wild beast.  He tried to speak to her as she ate.
  
“You know, I was... ah... I’m glad you could make to meet me.  You know, you have the loveliest... petals.”
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“You know, I was... ah... I’m glad you could make to meet me.  You know, you have th loveliest... petals.”
  
 
“Oh, you like them?” she said with her mouth full.  “Some people say they make me look like a freak of nature.  Do you hear that, Wing!”
 
“Oh, you like them?” she said with her mouth full.  “Some people say they make me look like a freak of nature.  Do you hear that, Wing!”

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