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“No, that’s not an option...”  He turned away and saw Selara trapped under the creatures paws while Yao Ye beat at it with her fists, ineffectually.
 
“No, that’s not an option...”  He turned away and saw Selara trapped under the creatures paws while Yao Ye beat at it with her fists, ineffectually.
  
“Zhou Wing, if you can help, now would be the time.”  She began pulling the cannon out of its mounting.  She tossed the cannon at his chest, and the amalgam was forced to grab it to keep from being crushed under the yard long tube of alloy and essence lenses.  Snow summoned her essence to her aid, and whispered lowly, “Please, Wing, I made a mistake tonight, and people died.  I have to do something, now.  Can you help me make this right?”
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“Zhou Wing, if you can help, now would be the time.”  She began pulling the cannon out of its mounting.  She tossed the cannon at his chest, and the amalgam was forced to grab it to keep from being crushed under the yard long tube of alloy and essence lenses.  Song summoned her essence to her aid, and whispered lowly, “Please, Wing, I made a mistake tonight, and people died.  I have to do something, now.  Can you help me make this right?”
  
 
Whether because of the charm or the impact of her words, Wing nodded his head.  He knelt on the deck and shouldered the cannon, sighting along it as well as he could.  Surveying the battle, he shook his head with gritted teeth.  “I can’t... they’re too close to it.”
 
Whether because of the charm or the impact of her words, Wing nodded his head.  He knelt on the deck and shouldered the cannon, sighting along it as well as he could.  Surveying the battle, he shook his head with gritted teeth.  “I can’t... they’re too close to it.”

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