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Alexia Khan walked into a rather seedy and disreputable establishment. 'Leonard's Cavern' was bar off the side of the North Piett Academy but not one attended by the elite of the students. The barely lit hyperpool hall and gambling parlor had a considerably lower class clientelle. It happened to be a location for students who wanted trouble to go to. Exactly where the man Alexia needed most should be found. | Alexia Khan walked into a rather seedy and disreputable establishment. 'Leonard's Cavern' was bar off the side of the North Piett Academy but not one attended by the elite of the students. The barely lit hyperpool hall and gambling parlor had a considerably lower class clientelle. It happened to be a location for students who wanted trouble to go to. Exactly where the man Alexia needed most should be found. | ||
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"Nice neighborhood," Ishikawa Amada said as he'd been forced by Admiral Katzman's two shocktrooper bodyguards to follow him. The quartet had been taken by black hoverlimo to a residential area in the South Quarter. The region was simultaneously the most heavily patrolled and least stable in the city. Sand colored buildings and boarded over windows gave the place the feel of a warzone. | "Nice neighborhood," Ishikawa Amada said as he'd been forced by Admiral Katzman's two shocktrooper bodyguards to follow him. The quartet had been taken by black hoverlimo to a residential area in the South Quarter. The region was simultaneously the most heavily patrolled and least stable in the city. Sand colored buildings and boarded over windows gave the place the feel of a warzone. |