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|birthplace= Unknown, First known location Icehome.
 
|birthplace= Unknown, First known location Icehome.
|birth= RY 689, 1st day of Resplendant Air.
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|birth= RY 704, 1st day of Resplendant Air.
 
|death=  
 
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|motivation= Visit and stay briefly in all the cultures of the new Deliberative
 
|motivation= Visit and stay briefly in all the cultures of the new Deliberative
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Her other favoured form is that of a nameless young girl, who had her mind eaten by Rakasha when Snow found her, taking pity on her Snow quickly put her out of her misery aware the form could be of use. In this form she appears a youngish girl just past adolescence, with bright blue eyes and shoulder length brown hair. In the past this form tended to wear humble peasant fair but in this age of the Deliberative, it is this form she favours while acting as a Deliberative Courier and thus tends to wear brown leather coat, suitable to shield herself from the cold of operating her swift rider over a white linen shirt, tan trousers and good leather riding boots. She refers to herself in this form by the unimaginative name of Young and Maiden Bright.  
 
Her other favoured form is that of a nameless young girl, who had her mind eaten by Rakasha when Snow found her, taking pity on her Snow quickly put her out of her misery aware the form could be of use. In this form she appears a youngish girl just past adolescence, with bright blue eyes and shoulder length brown hair. In the past this form tended to wear humble peasant fair but in this age of the Deliberative, it is this form she favours while acting as a Deliberative Courier and thus tends to wear brown leather coat, suitable to shield herself from the cold of operating her swift rider over a white linen shirt, tan trousers and good leather riding boots. She refers to herself in this form by the unimaginative name of Young and Maiden Bright.  
 
==Motivation==
 
==Motivation==
*Visit and stay briefly in all the cultures of the new Deliberative (COMPLETE)
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*Visit and stay briefly in all the cultures of the new Deliberative
*Build her Ideal Nation, where Mortals reign
 
 
 
 
==Intimacies==
 
==Intimacies==
 
*Mortals (Fascination)
 
*Mortals (Fascination)
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===Physical===  
 
===Physical===  
 
*Strength: ••••
 
*Strength: ••••
*'''Dexterity: ••••••''' (Movement +3)
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*'''Dexterity: •••••''' (Movement +3)
 
*Stamina: •••••
 
*Stamina: •••••
  
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*'''Martial Arts''' ••••• (While Moving +3)
 
*'''Martial Arts''' ••••• (While Moving +3)
 
*Melee  
 
*Melee  
*Resistance
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*Resistance  
 
*Thrown •
 
*Thrown •
 
*War •
 
*War •
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===Life===  
 
===Life===  
 
*Craft (Air: Mapmaking) •••
 
*Craft (Air: Mapmaking) •••
*Craft (Fire: Minor Metal Repairs) ••
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*Craft (Fire: Minor Metal Repairs)
*Craft (Magitek: Communication and Calculation Devices) •••••
 
 
*Larceny •
 
*Larceny •
*Linguistics ••• (Native: Sky-Tongue, Learned: Old Realm, Riverspeak, Autocthonian)
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*Linguistics •• (Native: Sky-Tongue, Learned: Old Realm, Riverspeak)
 
*Performance
 
*Performance
 
*Presence •
 
*Presence •
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===Ally/Familiar ••===
 
===Ally/Familiar ••===
 
"Triumph" Name of the Swift Riders AI. See Artefact Section for Details.
 
"Triumph" Name of the Swift Riders AI. See Artefact Section for Details.
 
===Ally ••••===
 
====Lilly of the Vale====
 
See NPC entry.
 
  
 
===Artefact •••••••===
 
===Artefact •••••••===
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**''Short Daiklave Form'' - Spd 4, Accuracy +6, Damage +4L, Defence +3, Rate 2, Tags -
 
**''Short Daiklave Form'' - Spd 4, Accuracy +6, Damage +4L, Defence +3, Rate 2, Tags -
 
**''Ranged Attack Form'' - Spd 6, Accuracy +0, Damage ''Special'', Rate 1, Range 50, Tags R, Special
 
**''Ranged Attack Form'' - Spd 6, Accuracy +0, Damage ''Special'', Rate 1, Range 50, Tags R, Special
===Artefact - Calibration Gifts===
 
====Cloak of Vanishing Escape(••••)====
 
A gift from Anshu, not currently committed.
 
 
====Snow's Raiment (•••)====
 
''A gift from Nomoe to Snow, a dress of some strange fabric softer and lighter even than Heavenly Silk in subtle shades of the evening sky, blue gradually darkening, then transitioning to violet and finally black. The way it seems to shift slightly when seen from different angles gives it an almost uncanny impression of depth like a piece of twilight itself made into cloth. The cut is elegant but modest, and the edges are embroidered with impossibly fine snow flakes, no two of them exactly alike."''
 
 
In cold mechanical terms Nomoe's gift would be the equivalent of Silken Armor that needs no committment (made from the color of evening by a celestial craft god puts it in the same category as Berengiere's creations) and can change its form/appearance similar to a garment with the Water aspect of Ritual of Elemental Empowerment, and thereby can grant a +2 equipment bonus to stealth or disguise
 
  
 
===Backing: The Deliberative •===
 
===Backing: The Deliberative •===
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Snow and Li were close once, prior to the return of the Solar's and the upheaval of the current era. After Tears of Amber died, Li was one of a few younger Lunar's that wished vengeance upon the Sidereal led Wyld Hunt. Bringing together Snow and seven other Lunars, he lead them against the Hunt where they slew several of the Fivefold Fellowship but failed to kill the leader. <br>
 
Snow and Li were close once, prior to the return of the Solar's and the upheaval of the current era. After Tears of Amber died, Li was one of a few younger Lunar's that wished vengeance upon the Sidereal led Wyld Hunt. Bringing together Snow and seven other Lunars, he lead them against the Hunt where they slew several of the Fivefold Fellowship but failed to kill the leader. <br>
 
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For a time afterwards, in an attempt to build her own combat prowess under an undisputed Master, Li was Snow's Sifu, enabling her to learn the basics of her art before disappearing. When she found him again it was just after the formation of the Celestial Deliberative and members of the Winding Path found themselves pushed to the edges of Silver Pack policy. For awhile she trained with Li content to see the situation sort itself out, till an altercation between the two on the Deliberative floor. <br><br> Harsh words were said, mostly between Li and Snow, words that flared Li's worst failing as a martial artist, his love of talking with his fists. Having called him on just that, the fight that erupted lasted just long enough for Snow to make a fighting retreat from the chamber. Some say she hasn't stopped running.
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For a time afterwards, in an attempt to build her own combat prowess under an undisputed Master, Li was Snow's Sifu, enabling her to learn the basics of her art before disappearing. When she found him again it was just after the formation of the Celestial Deliberative and members of the Winding Path found themselves pushed to the edges of Silver Pack policy. For awhile she trained with Li content to see the situation sort itself out, till an altercation between the two on the Deliberative floor. <br><br> Harsh words were said, mostly between Li and Snow, words that flared Li's worst failing as a martial artist, his love of talking with his fists. Having called him on just that, the fight that erupted lasted just long enough for Snow to make a fighting retreat from the chamber. Some stay she hasn't stopped running.
 
 
 
====Intolerance 2: Sidereals====
 
====Intolerance 2: Sidereals====
 
Sidereals were responsible for her beloved Mentor's death and all her dealings with them were as adverseries. History in this case has taught her well and she holds an inate distrust and dislike of the Chosen of the Maidens.
 
Sidereals were responsible for her beloved Mentor's death and all her dealings with them were as adverseries. History in this case has taught her well and she holds an inate distrust and dislike of the Chosen of the Maidens.
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* Ferocious Guardian Beast Stance
 
* Ferocious Guardian Beast Stance
 
* Heron Sheds Rain
 
* Heron Sheds Rain
* Vigilant Mastiff Technique
 
  
 
====Movement Charms====
 
====Movement Charms====
 
* Instinct Driven Beast Movement
 
* Instinct Driven Beast Movement
 
* Furious Hound Driven Pursuit
 
* Furious Hound Driven Pursuit
====Speed and Extra Action Charms====
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* Wasp Stinging Blur
 
 
===Stamina===
 
===Stamina===
====Endurance Charms====
 
* Steadfast Yeddim Meditation
 
* Luna's Fortitude
 
====Fury Charms====
 
 
*Relentless Lunar Fury
 
*Relentless Lunar Fury
 
 
===Charisma===
 
===Charisma===
 
* Outworld-Forsaking Stance
 
* Outworld-Forsaking Stance
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===Perception===
 
===Perception===
====Essence====
 
* Eye of the Cat
 
 
====Perception Advantage====
 
====Perception Advantage====
 
* Keen Sight Technique
 
* Keen Sight Technique
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===Intelligence===
 
===Intelligence===
====Insight====
 
 
*Inevitable Genius Insight
 
*Inevitable Genius Insight
 
*Flexible Panoply Approach
 
*Flexible Panoply Approach
====Wyld====
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*Laughing into the Teeth of Madness
* Laughing into the Teeth of Madness
 
* Still Pond Infliction
 
* Burgeoning Wyld Infliction
 
* Withdrawal of Assumptions
 
  
 
===Martial Arts===
 
===Martial Arts===
 
====Five Dragon====
 
* Five Dragon Claw
 
* Five Dragon Force Blow
 
* Five Dragon Blocking
 
* Five Dragon Fortitude
 
* Five Dragon Form
 
* Five Dragon Fist
 
* Five Dragon Invulnerability
 
* Five Dragon Wrath
 
 
 
====Crystal Chameleon====
 
====Crystal Chameleon====
 
*Just Another Branch of Deceit
 
*Just Another Branch of Deceit
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*Shattered Crystal Rebuke
 
*Shattered Crystal Rebuke
 
*Stepping Beyond the Light Prana
 
*Stepping Beyond the Light Prana
 
===White Reaper===
 
*Falling Scythe Flash
 
*Revolving Crescent Defense
 
*White Reaper Form
 
*Bleeding Crescent Strike
 
*Impenetrable White Shroud
 
*Flickering Corona Barrier
 
*Greatest Killer Attitude
 
*Enemies Like Grass
 
*Snow Follows Winter
 
 
==Combos==
 
 
* '''Those That Fear the Light, Fear Wisely''' - Death From Nowhere Method, Five Dragon Force Blow, Withdrawl of Assumptions (9m, 1wp)
 
* '''Moonlight Rends the Dark''' - Five Dragon Wrath, Withdrawl of Assumptions (4m, 1wp / attack, +1hl)
 
  
 
==Knacks==
 
==Knacks==
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===Form Acquisition Knacks: Supernatural===
 
===Form Acquisition Knacks: Supernatural===
 
*Hearth-and-Flame Shell
 
*Hearth-and-Flame Shell
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*Terrestrial Bloodline Integration
 
===Shape-shifting Refinement===
 
===Shape-shifting Refinement===
 
* Changing Plumage Mastery
 
* Changing Plumage Mastery
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==Essence==
 
==Essence==
* Permanent Essence: ••••••
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* Permanent Essence: •••••
** Personal Motes: 23
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** Personal Motes: 21
** Peripheral Motes: 50 (60 motes without commitments)
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** Peripheral Motes: 46 (56 motes without commitments)
 
** Committed Motes: 10
 
** Committed Motes: 10
  
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===Time of the Deliberative===
 
===Time of the Deliberative===
A flickering image appears on a Crystal Screen, a recording playing in some deserted manse. From nowhere and everywhere the manse speaks, in the voice of a woman.
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Information File Currently Closed By Order of Deliberator Solitary Talon
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'''"Record One, Journey's Start."'''
 
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Moments later a woman strides onto the screen, pale like her namesake, no colour to her hair dressed in a red simple dress. <br>
 
"I've chosen to start this log..." She pauses pain on her face. "... in the wake of the failure of my Thousand Rivers Stream project. It has been lost to the Wyld. My new project will detail the cultures of those societies still in existence, a great work to preserve what remains in Creation. My hope is in my travels I will find some insight that I can use to craft a society that will survive where others fail, one that will evade Time's decaying grasp." She pauses glancing off screen. "At the present I am not sure how much of the Pact survives or even the Realm, however much I do not care for it. Shortly I will leave my manse, one of the last gifts of my mentor and see what remains. Periodically, especially when I reach a new society I will attempt to use the recorder to update my conclusions. Only rarely will I personally address whatever audience this draws, in an effort to minimise any bias. Much of this diary will be things I observe or occur around me, which means there will still be some but not the sort put into words." She glances off camera once again, biting her lower lip. "Lunar forgive me I hope there is something left." The image fades.<br>
 
The recording skips travel, showing the snowy landscapes forever altered by the Wyld in a montage, ending at the edge of Creation, as she arrives at Gethsemane. The city itself seems sealed, so she proceeds on to Whitewall. There are then a scattering of images as she explorers that city, spying on its people in many guises and questioning them in others. Large quantities of the records seem skipped here, by whomever is controlling what is viewed. The voice repeats.
 
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'''"Record Two, Whitewall."'''<br>
 
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Snow is now somewhere inside a building. A bed of solid construction and shuttered windows ghostly represented in the background. Snow is sat on the bed, glancing towards the camera. "I know in my first recording I claimed I wasn't going to add much in the way of records to this... and that is still my intention but I suspect I need someone to talk to..." That she has no one else is left unsaid but the way she says that makes it abundantly clear. "Especially after the events of the last few days..." <br>
 
"As you will no doubt see from my records, a Circle of Lawgivers and Stewards have reclaimed the Realm Defence Grid. They no seem intent on gathering the others of their kind in a Deliberative, much like the one of old based once again in the Blessed Isle. As a student of history I can only wonder if the events of the past are repeating themselves." The recorder goes dark as Snow moves towards it looking worried, her eyes a whirling mess of colours.
 
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There is another skip, Snow obviously turned off the recorder. When she returns she looks more composed. The terror and worry has mostly retreated from her small frame and her eyes have settled back to a more icy blue.
 
I saw one of them, one of these returned Lawgivers. He was requesting the privilege of representing Whitewall as their representative. A strange state of affairs, not one of the old world as my mentor taught me of that age. But how long can a Lawgiver abide by the command of mortals? To any of the Exalted they are as Mayflies... dead with the autumn."
 
  
 
==Personality==
 
==Personality==
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==Experience==
 
==Experience==
Total: 569
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Total: 308
Spent: 561
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Spent: 260
Unspent: 0
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Unspent: 48
  
 
===Expenditures===
 
===Expenditures===
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* Charisma •• to ••• (6xp)
 
* Charisma •• to ••• (6xp)
 
* Stamina •••• to ••••• (16xp)
 
* Stamina •••• to ••••• (16xp)
* Dexterity ••••• to •••••• (15xp)
 
  
 
====Abilities====
 
====Abilities====
 
* Integrity • to •• (2xp)
 
* Integrity • to •• (2xp)
* Linguistics •• to ••• (4xp)
 
* Resistance • (3xp)
 
* Craft(Fire) • to •• (3xp)
 
* Craft(Magitek) to •••• (12xp)
 
  
 
====Advantages====
 
====Advantages====
* Ally •••• (12xp)
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* None
* Essence •••••• (40xp)
 
  
 
====Backgrounds====
 
====Backgrounds====
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* Light-Footed Mountain Goat Stance (8xp)
 
* Light-Footed Mountain Goat Stance (8xp)
 
* Blood-Kin Sense (8xp)
 
* Blood-Kin Sense (8xp)
* Still Pond Infliction (10xp)
 
* Burgeoning Wyld Infliction (10xp)
 
* Withdrawal of Assumptions (10xp)
 
* Eye of the Cat (8xp)
 
* Vigilant Mastiff Technique (8xp)
 
* Wasp Stinging Blur (8xp)
 
* Five Dragon Claw (4xp)
 
* Five Dragon Forceblow (4xp)
 
* White Reaper Style (72xp)
 
* Steadfast Yeddim Mediatation (10xp)
 
* Luna's Fortitude (10xp)
 
* God Cutting Essence(8xp)
 
* Five Dragon Style (24xp)
 
 
====Combos====
 
* Combo 1 - 15xp
 
* Combo 2 - 10xp
 
  
 
====Knacks====
 
====Knacks====
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* Hearth-And-Flame Shell (10xp)
 
* Hearth-And-Flame Shell (10xp)
 
* Illimitable Beast Declaration (10xp)
 
* Illimitable Beast Declaration (10xp)
* Terrestrial Bloodline Integration (10xp)
 
  
 
====Spells====
 
====Spells====
 
* None
 
* None
 
===Planned Expenditures===
 
*Charisma 4
 
*Manipulation 6
 

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