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[[Image:RedSid2.png|frame|<div style="text-align: center;"> Crimson Meteor in working uniform </div>]]
 
[[Image:RedSid2.png|frame|<div style="text-align: center;"> Crimson Meteor in working uniform </div>]]
 
[[Image:RedSid3.png|frame|<div style="text-align: center;"> Crimson Meteor off-duty </div>]]
 
[[Image:RedSid3.png|frame|<div style="text-align: center;"> Crimson Meteor off-duty </div>]]
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*'''Siran Bhavna, the Crimson Meteor'''
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*'''Crimson Meteor'''
 
*Caste: Chosen of Battles
 
*Caste: Chosen of Battles
 
*Concept: Ace Warstrider Pilot
 
*Concept: Ace Warstrider Pilot
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*''This woman's fierce, confident grin is infectious, and as her red eyes meet yours, you suddenly feel as if you would charge into Malfeas itself at her back.''
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*''First Impression and Appearance Text''
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*Character Song: [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oLlJD7EAsYg&fmt=18 Char's Counterattack Main Theme]
 
 
==Motivation==
 
==Motivation==
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Lead the Deliberative's warstrider forces to victory over the deathlords.
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Lead Denandsor's warstrider forces to victory over the Mask of Winters
  
 
==Intimacies==
 
==Intimacies==
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* Charisma 3
 
* Charisma 3
 
* Manipulation 3
 
* Manipulation 3
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* Appearance 7 (4 without Stone of Feral Beauty)
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* Appearance 4
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===Mental===
 
===Mental===
 
* Perception 5
 
* Perception 5
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===Auspicious===
 
===Auspicious===
 
*Archery 5
 
*Archery 5
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*Integrity 4
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*Integrity 2
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*Melee 4
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*Melee
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*Presence 4
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*Presence 3
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*War 5
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*War 4
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===Favored===
 
===Favored===
 
*Athletics 2
 
*Athletics 2
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===Unfavored===
 
===Unfavored===
 
* Craft (Fate) 5 (Resplendent Destinies +3)
 
* Craft (Fate) 5 (Resplendent Destinies +3)
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*Linguistics 4 (''Riverspeak'', Seatongue, Low/High/Old Realm)
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*Linguistics 0 (''Riverspeak'')
 
*Performance 5 (praying to pattern spiders +3)
 
*Performance 5 (praying to pattern spiders +3)
 
*Resistance 2
 
*Resistance 2
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===Artifact 1 (Starmetal Fivefold Harmonic Adapter)===
 
===Artifact 1 (Starmetal Fivefold Harmonic Adapter)===
 
This adapter allows Crimson Meteor to attune to (and gain the magical material benefits of) her blue jade warstrider flight system without having to commit twice the normal amount of essence. (''WotLA'', p. 57)
 
This adapter allows Crimson Meteor to attune to (and gain the magical material benefits of) her blue jade warstrider flight system without having to commit twice the normal amount of essence. (''WotLA'', p. 57)
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===Artifact 2 (Starmetal Skin Mount Amulet)===
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===Artifact 1 (Starmetal Fivefold Harmonic Adapter)===
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Holds Battle Fire Ruby
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This adapter allows Crimson Meteor to attune to her Elsewhere stutter cannon without having to commit twice the normal amount of essence. (''WotLA'', p. 57)
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===Artifact 2 (Starmetal Skin Mount Amulet)===
 
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Holds Willstone of the Strategos
 
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===Artifact 2 (Starmetal Skin Mount Amulet)===
 
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Holds Stone of Feral Beauty
 
 
===Artifact 3 ([[Once more with feeling/Denandsor Council/Cabinet/Ministry/Defense & Logistics/Navy/Hurricane|''Hurricane''-class Variable Common Warstrider]])===
 
===Artifact 3 ([[Once more with feeling/Denandsor Council/Cabinet/Ministry/Defense & Logistics/Navy/Hurricane|''Hurricane''-class Variable Common Warstrider]])===
 
===Artifact 3 (Essence Capacitor)===
 
===Artifact 3 (Essence Capacitor)===
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''DotFA Lords'', p. 90
 
''DotFA Lords'', p. 90
 
===Artifact 3 ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Artifacts#Elsewhere_Stutter_Cannon|Warstrider Elsewhere Stutter Cannon]])===
 
===Artifact 3 ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Artifacts#Elsewhere_Stutter_Cannon|Warstrider Elsewhere Stutter Cannon]])===
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===Backing 3 (Denandsor Council Navy)===
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===Backing 2 (Denandsor Council Navy)===
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Holds the rank of Sky Commander in the Navy.
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===Command 1===
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===Command 2 (Denandsor Sky Forces)===
 
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Crimson Meteor commands the [[Once_more_with_feeling/Denandsor_Council/Cabinet/Ministry/Defense_%26_Logistics/Navy/Enlightened_Naval_Pilots|60 active pilots]] of the Denandsor Sky Forces.
 
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===Connections 4 (Denandsor Council)===
 
===Connections 4 (Denandsor Council)===
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===Manse 2 (Battle Fire Ruby)===
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===Resources 1===
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This hearthstone is a fi ne ruby with 10 identical, kiteshaped facets. This stone continually fills the bearer with aggression and certainty. When rolling the character’s Conviction or Valor, add two dice to the roll. Likewise, when rolling Compassion or Temperance, subtract two dice from the roll (to a minimum of one die).
 
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This manse is called [[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Manses#The_Coal_Fields_.E2.88.82|The Coal Fields]].
 
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===Manse 4 (Willstone of the Strategos)===
 
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This bright-red, spindle-shaped hearthstone has a dark-purple center. This stone provides the commander of
 
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any battle with profound insights into the likely course of events and how he can use his troops to best effect. When in mass combat, the player can roll the character’s (Wits + War) as a Speed 3, -0 DV action: Every two successes scored (round up) adds 1 to her unit’s Valor, and every four successes (round up) adds 1 to all of the unit’s other dice pools involving mass combat. If this stone raises the combat unit’s Valor above 5, the soldiers become temporarily immune to fear and will not fail any Valor checks until their Valor falls to 5 or lower.
 
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The commander must be able to communicate with her troops to grant them these benefits. Also, all
 
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bonuses are reduced by one every 6 mass combat ticks. Bonuses gained from successive rolls do not stack, but
 
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higher rolls can supplant earlier rolls at the bearer’s option. Charms (including Excellencies) cannot be used to improve the (Wits + War) pool, but the character can channel Virtues to do so—Valor is always appropriate, and Conviction normally is.
 
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This manse is called [[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Manses#The_Shogunate_War_Museum_.E2.88.82|The Shogunate War Museum]].
 
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===Manse 4 ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Hearthstones#The_Stone_of_Feral_Beauty|Stone of Feral Beauty]])===
 
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This rough cut white opal shines with an inner light and adds three dots to wearer's appearance, up to a maximum of 7. In addition nothing of the natural world can make the character look less beautiful. Coated in mud, blood, faeces or any such representation of the natural world will in fact make the character gain an additional point to appearence from the stone. Anything not of the natural world may reduce the characters appearance but that is left up to Storyteller discresion.
 
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This manse is called [[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Manses#The_House_of_Sextes_Jylis_.E2.88.82|The House of Sextes Jylis]].
 
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===Resources 3===
 
  
 
==Charms==
 
==Charms==
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*Absence (p. 15)
 
*Absence (p. 15)
 
*Duck Fate (pp. 15-16)
 
*Duck Fate (pp. 15-16)
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*Avoidance Kata (p. 16)
 
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===Integrity===
 
===Integrity===
 
*First Integrity Excellency (''Loom 2.0'', p. 4)
 
*First Integrity Excellency (''Loom 2.0'', p. 4)
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*Fourth Lore Excellency (p. 5)
 
*Fourth Lore Excellency (p. 5)
 
*Propitious Lore Alignment (p. 5)
 
*Propitious Lore Alignment (p. 5)
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*Avoiding the Truth Technique (p. 35)
 
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===Martial Arts===
 
===Martial Arts===
 
*First Martial Arts Excellency (''Loom 2.0'', p. 4)
 
*First Martial Arts Excellency (''Loom 2.0'', p. 4)
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*Propitious Martial Arts Alignment (p. 5)
 
*Propitious Martial Arts Alignment (p. 5)
 
*Fateful Martial Arts Design ("in warstriders", p. 5)
 
*Fateful Martial Arts Design ("in warstriders", p. 5)
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*High-Flying Daredevil Style (Terrestrial)
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*Motonic Afterburner Surge ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Charms#Motonic_Afterburner_Surge|OMWF Custom]])
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**Motonic Afterburner Surge ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Motonic_Afterburner_Surge|OMWF Custom]])
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*Essence Missile Method ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Charms#Essence_Missile_Method|OMWF Custom]])
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**Essence Missile Method ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Essence_Missile_Method|OMWF Custom]])
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*High-Flying Daredevil Form ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Charms#High-Flying_Daredevil_Form|OMWF Custom]])
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**High-Flying Daredevil Form ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#High-Flying_Daredevil_Form|OMWF Custom]])
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*Devil-May-Care Evasion ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Charms#Devil-May-Care_Evasion|OMWF Custom]])
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**Devil-May-Care Evasion ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Devil-May-Care_Evasion|OMWF Custom]])
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*Interception and Elimination Kata ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Charms#Interception_and_Elimination_Kata|OMWF Custom]])
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**Interception and Elimination Kata ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Interception_and_Elimination_Kata|OMWF Custom]])
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*Overwhelming Missile Storm ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Charms#Overwhelming_Missile_Storm|OMWF Custom]])
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**Overwhelming Missile Storm ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Overwhelming_Missile_Storm|OMWF Custom]])
 
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*Panoply of the Maiden of Battles Style (Celestial)
 
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**Awareness of the Battle Maiden ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Awareness_of_the_Battle_Maiden|OMWF Custom]])
 
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**Lance of the Battle Maiden ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Lance_of_the_Battle_Maiden|OMWF Custom]])
 
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**Shield of the Battle Maiden ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Shield_of_the_Battle_Maiden|OMWF Custom]])
 
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**Sword of the Battle Maiden ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Sword_of_the_Battle_Maiden|OMWF Custom]])
 
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**Guise of the General Form ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Guise_of_the_General_Form|OMWF Custom]])
 
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**Guise of the Judge Form ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Guise_of_the_Judge_Form|OMWF Custom]])
 
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**Guise of the Sifu Form ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Guise_of_the_Sifu_Form|OMWF Custom]])
 
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**Guise of the Soldier Form ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Guise_of_the_Soldier_Form|OMWF Custom]])
 
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**Panoply of the Maiden of Battles Form ([[Once_more_with_feeling/Custom_Martial_Arts#Panoply_of_the_Maiden_of_Battles_Form|OMWF Custom]])
 
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===Performance===
 
===Performance===
 
*First Performance Excellency (''Loom 2.0'', p. 4)
 
*First Performance Excellency (''Loom 2.0'', p. 4)
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*Third Presence Excellency (pp. 4-5)
 
*Third Presence Excellency (pp. 4-5)
 
*Fourth Presence Excellency (p. 5)
 
*Fourth Presence Excellency (p. 5)
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*Heroic Essence Replenishment (p. 27)
 
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*Vermilion District Haze (p. 27)
 
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*Impose Motivation (p. 27)
 
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*Force Decision (p. 27)
 
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===Ride===
 
===Ride===
 
*First Ride Excellency (''Loom 2.0'', p. 4)
 
*First Ride Excellency (''Loom 2.0'', p. 4)
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*Mandate of Celestial War (p. 29)
 
*Mandate of Celestial War (p. 29)
 
*Predestined Triumph Practice (p. 29)
 
*Predestined Triumph Practice (p. 29)
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*Demon-Blocking Battle Pattern (p. 30)
 
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==Astrological Colleges==
 
==Astrological Colleges==
 
* House of Battles
 
* House of Battles
 
** The Banner 5
 
** The Banner 5
 
===Resplendent Destiny===
 
===Resplendent Destiny===
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*'''Siran Bhavna, the Crimson Meteor, Ace Sidereal Warstrider Pilot''' (The Banner)
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*'''Crimson Meteor, Ace Sidereal Warstrider Pilot''' (The Banner)
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**The Banner is ''strikingly clad'' and ''always among you''. She is ''fearless'', ''victorious'' and ''larger than life''.
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**The Banner is ''strikingly clad'' and ''always among you''. He is ''fearless'', ''victorious'' and ''larger than life''.
 
**Scope 2
 
**Scope 2
 
**Duration 6: 140 years
 
**Duration 6: 140 years
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==Essence==
 
==Essence==
 
Essence: 5<br>
 
Essence: 5<br>
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Personal: 9/18<br>
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Personal: 18/18<br>
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Peripheral: 71/51 + 20 (skin mount amulets)<br>
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Peripheral: 51/51<br>
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Committed: 4<br>
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Committed: 0<br>
  
 
==Willpower==
 
==Willpower==
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7 of 8
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8 of 8
  
 
==Virtues==
 
==Virtues==
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Shieldbearers’ Flawed Fates force them to advocate, seek or cause ever-greater conflicts for a single session (week of play)
 
Shieldbearers’ Flawed Fates force them to advocate, seek or cause ever-greater conflicts for a single session (week of play)
  
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==Combat==
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==Equipment==
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Join Battle: 9
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*List your stuff here, including combat stats if you have weapons
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'''Unarmed'''<br>
 
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Clinch: Spd 6/Acc +0/Dmg +0B/Def ~/Rate 1<br>
 
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Kick: Spd 5/Acc +0/Dmg +3B/Def -2/Rate 2<br>
 
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Punch: Spd 5/Acc +1/Dmg +0B/Def +2/Rate 3<br>
 
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Dodge DV: 8, 5 in warstrider bird mode, 2 in warstrider humanoid mode<br>
 
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Parry DV: 7 (unarmed or in warstrider)<br>
 
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Hardness (from armor): 10 (warstrider)<br>
 
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Natural Soak: 4B/2L<br>
 
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Armored Soak: 20B/20L/20A (warstrider)<br>
 
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Total Soak: 24B/22L/20A<br>
 
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===Health Levels===
 
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-0 [ ][ ][ ][ ]<br>
 
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-1 [ ][ ]<br>
 
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-2 [ ][ ]<br>
 
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-4 [ ]<br>
 
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In [ ]<br>
 
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Dy [ ][ ][ ][ ]<br>
 
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==Social Combat==
 
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Join Debate: 9
 
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'''Charisma/Manipulation'''<br>
 
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Performance: Spd 6/Rate 1<br>
 
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Presence: Spd 4/Rate 2<br>
 
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Investigation: Spd 5/Rate 2<br>
 
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Dodge MDV: 9<br>
 
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Parry MDV: 3 (Presence), 4 (Performance)<br>
 
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==History==
 
==History==
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*[http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AQnIb3I8PTZpZGdnZGNkOXRfMTR3aDRxamdt&hl=en Crimson Meteor's Origin Story]
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*Give us at least two or three short paragraphs
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==Personality==
 
==Personality==
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*The Crimson Meteor is a fiercely driven and courageous young woman, given to theatrics and bursts of enthusiasm verging on recklessness. Although willing to sacrifice lives under her command, she does not do so lightly, and values the camaraderie she has built up with her subordinates. She is proud almost to the point of arrogance of the accomplishments of her pilots and especially of her personal squadron, considering them the best of the best (and herself the best of them).
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*In private moments when she can remove her Resplendent Destiny, Siran Bhavna reveals herself to share the personality traits of her public persona, although to a somewhat less extreme degree. For example,  when sharing the credit with her squadron, the Crimson Meteor might say, "I couldn't have done it without them watching my back"; Siran Bhavna would be more likely to say, "We're the best of the best, each and every one of us. It wouldn't have mattered who was taking the shot, the rest of us would have been right behind him."
 
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==Merits & Flaws==
 
==Merits & Flaws==
 
===Legendary Dexterity (3pts)===
 
===Legendary Dexterity (3pts)===
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==Goals and Motivations==
 
==Goals and Motivations==
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*Forge the Denandsor Navy Pilot Force into a weapon that can take down a Deathlord.
 
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==Unspent XP==
 
==Unspent XP==
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12
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169
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===Spent On===
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*Compassion 3 - 6xp
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*Compassionate Essence Replenishment - 12xp
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*Faultless Ceremony - 12xp
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*Heart-Brightening Presentation Style - 12xp
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*Ox-Body Technique (x3) - 36xp
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*Unswerving Juggernaut Principle - 12xp

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