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<br>'''Gabe:''' A piece of obsidian washed smooth by water, but then scratched and chipped as left the river and crossed harsh rocks on its way to you. It retains the memory of volcanic heat, tempered into comforting warmth. Looking through it your vision becomes clear and sharp, you see things as they really are. And although it is not made for it, should you be desperate you could use it as a weapon.
 
<br>'''Gabe:''' A piece of obsidian washed smooth by water, but then scratched and chipped as left the river and crossed harsh rocks on its way to you. It retains the memory of volcanic heat, tempered into comforting warmth. Looking through it your vision becomes clear and sharp, you see things as they really are. And although it is not made for it, should you be desperate you could use it as a weapon.
 
<br>'''Liz:''' I see Liz as a living flame. One that jumps here and there, rarely in the same place twice, that defies attempts to define boundaries of make use of it, that can be no more than glowing embers one moment and flare brightly the next, that can warm you but also burn you and that is happiest when everything around it also burns.
 
<br>'''Liz:''' I see Liz as a living flame. One that jumps here and there, rarely in the same place twice, that defies attempts to define boundaries of make use of it, that can be no more than glowing embers one moment and flare brightly the next, that can warm you but also burn you and that is happiest when everything around it also burns.
<br>'''John Palmer:''' A great snake with scales of smooth, matte-finished titanium. Patient and appearing to be happy just lying in the sun and doing nothing - but when it strikes it will be quickly and deadly. But if it is your friend, good things happen to you and bad things to your enemies.
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<br>'''John Palmer:''' A great snake with scales of smooth, matt-finished titanium. Patient and appearing to be happy just lying in the sun and doing nothing - but when it strikes it will be quickly and deadly. But if it is your friend, good things happen to you and bad things to your enemies.
 
<br>'''Robert:''' The totem fits well indeed. A young wolf, but in the wild time passes quickly and he has seen his share of fights and scars. He lives on what he hunts, eats well after every kill and grows lean between successful hunts. Going his way alone, but loyal where he finds himself with a pack. His dangerousness and cunning and the subject of proverbs and folk tales.
 
<br>'''Robert:''' The totem fits well indeed. A young wolf, but in the wild time passes quickly and he has seen his share of fights and scars. He lives on what he hunts, eats well after every kill and grows lean between successful hunts. Going his way alone, but loyal where he finds himself with a pack. His dangerousness and cunning and the subject of proverbs and folk tales.
 
<br>'''Jian:''' A leaf on the wind, taking every twist and turn of the chaos like it's his own breath. You can try to steer the leaf in one direction, but you can never control all the winds on which it rides and thus never catch it. He is part of the wind, yet he is not, his path is determined by it, yet it is not.
 
<br>'''Jian:''' A leaf on the wind, taking every twist and turn of the chaos like it's his own breath. You can try to steer the leaf in one direction, but you can never control all the winds on which it rides and thus never catch it. He is part of the wind, yet he is not, his path is determined by it, yet it is not.
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===Astra===
 
===Astra===
 
''A set of bright blue pages, a portal to another realm.''
 
''A set of bright blue pages, a portal to another realm.''
<br>[http://www.thefreedomstone.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=6058 Fifty-line Pillars] - Three sets of 50 themes, one written with sentences, two written with fifty word drabblets. The third focuses on Cassidy's childhood.<br>
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<br>[http://www.thefreedomstone.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=6058 Fifty-line Pillars] - Two sets of 50 themes, one written with sentences, one written with fifty word drabblets.
[[Scenes of Friendship]] - The archive of all of the non-game scenes showing Cassidy's interactions with people.
 
===MPascal02's Haiku Challenge===
 
''But, wait! A question.<br>
 
''If I haiku the whole cast<br>
 
''Will I get XP?'' - '''Pascal'''
 
 
 
''If XP you seek''<br>
 
''Then show us your haiku skill''<br>
 
''I love this game guys.'' - '''Aincumis'''
 
 
 
''Is that a challenge?<br>
 
''Now it's on like Donkey Kong --<br>
 
''Alternately, Tron.'' - '''Pascal'''
 
<br><br>
 
 
 
*'''Darius'''
 
Oh say can you see,<br>
 
by our Dawn caste's anima,<br>
 
that RPG round?
 
 
 
Ex-military<br>
 
Mercenary for hire.<br>
 
A-team, or our Dawn?<br>
 
 
 
*'''Cassidy'''
 
Was an agnostic,<br>
 
Now she seems to speak for God.<br>
 
Girl got religion.<br>
 
 
 
Lucifer, Xander,<br>
 
Rob too. Too much harem an-<br>
 
-ime for my tastes.<br>
 
 
 
(Following that last<br>
 
to its logical end -- does<br>
 
that make Gabe Washuu?)<br>
 
 
 
Seriously, just<br>
 
how many gods and spirits<br>
 
want her as their voice?<br>
 
 
 
Blow her up, she soaks,<br>
 
and counters -- never mind. I<br>
 
guess Rob got there first.<br>
 
 
 
*'''Gabe'''
 
Genius Twilight builds<br>
 
bombs and cures with perfect ease.<br>
 
Cue McGuyver's theme.<br>
 
 
 
The nicest guy in<br>
 
our Ellipse. Shame about the<br>
 
whole blood-addict thing.<br>
 
 
 
*'''Liz'''
 
Night caste serves Justice,<br>
 
leaps from rooftops across streets --<br>
 
Not Batgirl, honest!<br>
 
 
 
Liz's ideal guy:<br>
 
Enjoys longs walks on rooftops;<br>
 
must not be wizard.<br>
 
 
 
Her friend just got turned<br>
 
as a part of Troile's plan.<br>
 
Here comes Limit Break!<br>
 
 
 
I know kung fu? No,<br>
 
but Liz does. She uses it<br>
 
to beat up cyborgs.<br>
 
 
 
*'''John'''
 
Former mob kingpin,<br>
 
now deposed. But that just gives<br>
 
him more room to work.<br>
 
 
 
A few different<br>
 
words, and John might have had his<br>
 
own vamp army now.<br>
 
 
 
Ellipse seems wary<br>
 
because of John's old job. That's<br>
 
just how he likes it.<br>
 
 
 
(Why is this so hard?<br>
 
John's my freaking character!<br>
 
Seriously, man.)<br>
 
 
 
*'''Break Time'''
 
Running out of space.<br>
 
The other three will follow;<br>
 
maybe NPCs? <br>
 
 
 
*'''Rob:'''
 
 
 
Garou loathe or a-<br>
 
-dore him; no middle ground. Wait,<br>
 
that's normal for them.<br>
 
 
 
Two Terrestrials<br>
 
and five Solars. Weirdest pack<br>
 
ever? Wait and see.<br>
 
 
 
Moonsilver claws flash,<br>
 
vampire blood hits the ground.<br>
 
Full moon's Rage is strong.<br>
 
 
 
Rob's biggest worry<br>
 
isn't the Wyrm. Rather, it's<br>
 
all those furry fans.<br>
 
 
 
*'''Johnny/Wu Jian'''
 
 
 
Loyalties are torn;<br>
 
his mistress or fiancee?<br>
 
(God, that sounds so wrong.)<br>
 
 
 
Watches for Exalts; <br>
 
tells family, Internet.<br>
 
When will we find out?<br>
 
 
 
Has a blood feud with<br>
 
the Brujah. Drama says we<br>
 
knew this was coming.<br>
 
 
 
Rides around on a<br>
 
miniature tornado.<br>
 
Call him Pecos Xian?<br>
 
 
 
*'''Sui Mae'''
 
 
 
Joined the party late,<br>
 
then almost killed Darius.<br>
 
Really, she means well!<br>
 
 
 
When she approaches,<br>
 
vampires scream out: "God, no,<br>
 
it's the Ginsu girl!"<br>
 
 
 
Snicker-snack, and so<br>
 
her swords lop off another<br>
 
head. Vorpal DB?<br>
 
 
 
*'''NPCs'''
 
 
 
Older Brit, hacker<br>
 
chick, and goths. We just need a <br>
 
blond mage for Buffy.<br>
 
 
 
Troile should remember:<br>
 
only seven points worth of<br>
 
Flaws get you BPs.<br>
 
 
 
Poor Reverend Brown.<br>
 
I'd almost feel sorry for --<br>
 
wait, no. He's a schmuck.<br>
 
 
 
Three suns, eight Exalts.<br>
 
One Antediluvian.<br>
 
Ready to rumble?<br>
 
 
 
Malevolent Fate<br>
 
seems to take an interest<br>
 
in us. Call him Q?<br><br>
 
 
 
''So, oh great ST,<br>
 
''draw any conclusions on<br>
 
''my haiku efforts?'' - '''Pascal'''<br>
 
 
 
''Your skill is alright<br>
 
''The poems rather well put<br>
 
''Two XP you get.'' - '''Aincumis'''<br>
 
  
 
== Character Tarot ==
 
== Character Tarot ==
 
''A book of notes, 21 pages with familiar faces on ornate cards...'' - Written by Astra and Meriss<br>
 
''A book of notes, 21 pages with familiar faces on ornate cards...'' - Written by Astra and Meriss<br>
 
[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Fool_(Tarot_card) '''0: The Fool''']  - Jian<br>
 
[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Fool_(Tarot_card) '''0: The Fool''']  - Jian<br>
The Chinese young man stands at the very precipice of a mountain, the winds spin around him, and they distract him as he is about to walk off the peak, though to his death or a new adventure is unknown. He is in very American clothes, with his charkam in hand, unaware of the danger at hand, due to the winds' joyful caresses.<br>
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The Air Aspect stands at the very precipice of a mountain, the winds spin around him, and they distract him as he is about to walk off the peak, though to his death or a new adventure is unknown. He is in very American clothes, with his charkam in hand, unaware of the danger at hand, due to the winds' joyful caresses.<br>
  
 
[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Magician_(Tarot_card) '''1: The Magicican'''] - Gabe<br>
 
[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Magician_(Tarot_card) '''1: The Magicican'''] - Gabe<br>
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[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Emperor_(Tarot_card) '''4: The Emperor'''] - John Palmer<br>
 
[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Emperor_(Tarot_card) '''4: The Emperor'''] - John Palmer<br>
The businessman is alone in the spotlight, smirking as he sits at the end of a board room table. As usual, he is dressed in a handsome suit, but now there's something extra. Lying on the table before him is a golden scepter and an ornate crown. The sides of his chair have rams on them as well, and looms over him, almost as if it is a throne.<br>
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The Eclipse is alone in the spotlight, smirking as he sits at the end of a board room table. As usual, he is dressed in a handsome suit, but now there's something extra. Lying on the table before him is a golden scepter and an ornate crown. The sides of his chair have rams on them as well, and looms over him, almost as if it is a throne.<br>
  
 
[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Hierophant_(Tarot_card) '''5: The Hierophant'''] - Gabriel<br>
 
[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Hierophant_(Tarot_card) '''5: The Hierophant'''] - Gabriel<br>
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Liz stands bright and gleaming as if she is metal, a blindfold covering her eyes, and her face obscured by the flaming sword she holds in one hand, and scales held in the other. She wears the robes of a judge, colored like the night. She doesn't smile or speak, and on her brow, even though the sword, you can see the caste mark of the Night. Her surroundings burn somewhat, for even as she is the night, she is also a living flame.<br>
 
Liz stands bright and gleaming as if she is metal, a blindfold covering her eyes, and her face obscured by the flaming sword she holds in one hand, and scales held in the other. She wears the robes of a judge, colored like the night. She doesn't smile or speak, and on her brow, even though the sword, you can see the caste mark of the Night. Her surroundings burn somewhat, for even as she is the night, she is also a living flame.<br>
  
[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Hanged_Man_(Tarot_card) '''12: The Hanged Man'''] - Gabe<br>
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[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Hanged_Man_(Tarot_card) '''12: The Hanged Man'''] - Gabe
 
The picture is obviously upside-down, so the glowing Solar's head is at the bottom of the card. Gabe is lying on the floor of a library, his legs crossed as to look like the number four, a book covered with runes on his chest.  There is a content smile on his lips, as if he finally has understood a mystery and can give into a well-deserved sleep.  He looks dead, but it's obvious if one waits, he'll rise up again.
 
The picture is obviously upside-down, so the glowing Solar's head is at the bottom of the card. Gabe is lying on the floor of a library, his legs crossed as to look like the number four, a book covered with runes on his chest.  There is a content smile on his lips, as if he finally has understood a mystery and can give into a well-deserved sleep.  He looks dead, but it's obvious if one waits, he'll rise up again.
  
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[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_World_(Tarot_card) '''21: The World'''] - All<br>
 
[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_World_(Tarot_card) '''21: The World'''] - All<br>
 
There is a circle broken, one of black wood.  However, there are eight people in the ruins, all doing something different.  Two figures, one silver, one gold, move away wreckage of the dark ring.  Two flames, one of passion and one of justice, dance in the forge, encouraged by the wind, to aid a third golden figure in smelting a new circle, one made out of shining gold. A fourth golden figure, more feminine, like the two fires, holds the pieces together in the face of the forces against the new cycle's union.  Finally, the fifth figure of gold is directing people in gathering the materials needed, making sure things run smoothly.  United, they create a world anew.<br>
 
There is a circle broken, one of black wood.  However, there are eight people in the ruins, all doing something different.  Two figures, one silver, one gold, move away wreckage of the dark ring.  Two flames, one of passion and one of justice, dance in the forge, encouraged by the wind, to aid a third golden figure in smelting a new circle, one made out of shining gold. A fourth golden figure, more feminine, like the two fires, holds the pieces together in the face of the forces against the new cycle's union.  Finally, the fifth figure of gold is directing people in gathering the materials needed, making sure things run smoothly.  United, they create a world anew.<br>
==Mindscape Project==
 
''A set of pictures, within the minds...''<br>
 
'''Cassidy:''' The Zenith's mind seems a seamless merging of a turn-of-the-century house and a Grecian temple, all made of metal.  The iron is somewhat rusted but still strong, the gold bright and gleaming.  However, some of the edges cut clean and deadly, and in its heart is a room of masks...<br>
 
'''Gabriel:'''  Gabe's mindscape is a multi-level library that is carefully organized and regularly cleaned.  Unfortunately, one of the librarians seems to have discovered a gateway into the primordial wellspring of knowledge and so, you know... that's just kind of there next to the cooking section.<br>
 
'''Johnny''' Jian's mind is a direct reflection of his experiences. In the beginning you stand in a incredibly large landscape that seems unending, it is full of gentle breezes which are totally visable as blue and white cloudlike structures. It is heavily stylized and easily recognizable to anyone familiar with Asian art. The landscape slowly blends into a near perfect replica of Hong Kong then Boston and finally Las Vegas.
 
 
==Language and Sorcery==
 
''Subsequent to the uncovering of evidence that the Enochian of the Seventh Age (WoD) might well be the same language as the Old Realm of the First Age (Exalted) this fragment of a conversation was found. It's a ripped up piece of paper annotated with time/date/location as well as file number and a reference to the recording agency - but all the specifics have been blacked out.''
 
 
It's a valid assumption, that Old Realm was the first language in the reality of Exalted. It doesn't have to be, though. What if Old Realm is not the first language at all? Maybe it's 'merely' the language in which the Primordial treaty of surrender was written. That treaty and the subsequent imprisonment of the Primordials has redefined both them and Creation, making it the fundamental language of the *new* reality that exists after the Primordial War.
 
 
Demons speak Old Realm, because that language has been forced on them, is part of their bindings. Gods speak Old Realm, because it is the language of their victory, the language of the redefined, newly anthropocentric Creation (which in turn causes the gods to become anthropomorphic themselves). Raksha speak Old Realm, because as far as they are defined at all they define themselves in relation to Creation. And everyone else speaks/spoke Old Realm, because it's the lingua franka and for the Exalted it is a reminder of their victory in every word.
 
 
''What would be the original language?''
 
 
Probably unimaginable to us as is the Creation before the Death of those who became the Neverborn and She Who Lives In Her Name's extinction of parts of reality. But I suppose it would have to be fluid - or more precisely consist of many interlocking languages, one for each Primordial and the part of reality it defines. If there is a common core, an intersection of those systems of definition, it would be the language the Primordials created in the moment they decided to act together to Shape Creation. The different species of beings that lived before the Primordial War and the mass-genocide the Exalted wrought would have spoken different subsets of that language according to which Primordial created them.
 
 
''You know what it could be? The language of Sorcery. You can alter the world with those words, backed by essence.''
 
 
How about it being the language of Infernal Sorcery? After all it would draw upon concepts and powers that belong to a Creation before the War, of a Creation ruled by the Primordials. So in shaping reality through those words you return it to what it was in the beginning and assert Primordial rulership-by-proxy over it. That would make sense in the context of sorcery being originally taught to Brigid by demons. "Here, have a gift of great power, that weakens our prison every time you use it."
 
 
Only then Brigid - being a Solar - found a way to do the previously impossible, to employ Old Realm as language of sorcery and in doing so defeated that insidious Yozi plot. Now the Primordial treaty is strengthened by every word of sorcery spoken and Creation kept stable and firmly in the hands of Incarna and Exalted.
 

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