Editing Condonzack Picks (Tobyverse)

'''Pitch'''

This is a world where atrocities walk the earth.

Mad scientists make the deepest dreams of the Third Reich reality, with science only they understand. Disgruntled wage slaves are tempted by actual demons to loose things mortals cannot even think of. A monster may devour children for no reason other than the joy of mayhem.

The people of the world are not okay with this.

In the 1950s, a super villian lair was converted into a submerged superprison. For years it was a mismanaged joke, until it was revamped into SHEOL, the greatest, most terrible prison in the world. Totally unchartable, nearly impenetrable, this is where the scourges of the earth are sent. Although that isn't to say there aren't escapes. There are a suprising number of them.

But God help those who do manage the task. Because Sheol is run by truly righteous men, and there is nothing more dangerous then a truly righteous man.

And (almost) no-one escapes twice.


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 The people of the world are not okay with this.
-In the 1950s, a super villain lair was converted into a submerged superprison. For years it was a mismanaged joke, until it was revamped into SHEOL, the greatest, most terrible prison in the world. Totally unchartable, nearly impenetrable, this is where the scourges of the earth are sent. Although that isn't to say there aren't escapes. There are a surprising number of them.
+In the 1950s, a super villian lair was converted into a submerged superprison. For years it was a mismanaged joke, until it was revamped into SHEOL, the greatest, most terrible prison in the world. Totally unchartable, nearly impenetrable, this is where the scourges of the earth are sent. Although that isn't to say there aren't escapes. There are a suprising number of them.
 But God help those who do manage the task. Because Sheol is run by truly righteous men, and there is nothing more dangerous then a truly righteous man.
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-==='''Arthur Pendragon, Attorney at Law'''===
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-A 50 year old lawyer claiming to be King Arthur.
-[[Arthur's Story (Tobyverse)|Arthur's Story]]
-==='''Sheol'''===
-Formerly a lair for Dr. Faust, now a UN-mandated superprison, where Dr. Faust happens to reside.
-[[About Sheol (Tobyverse)|About Sheol]]
-==='''Professor Faust'''===
-Johann Faust is almost 500 years old. He sold his soul to the devil. Two hundred years later he broke into hell and stole it back. He is perpetually middle aged.
-[[Professor Faust's Story (Tobyverse)|Professor Faust's Story]]
-==='''Chief Warden Ulysses Orlando Burns'''===
-A truly righteous man with a mysterious past, [[About Blackwell Academy (Tobyverse)|Blackwell]] graduate, now head warden and director of the newly restructured Sheol.
-[[Ulysses Burns' Story (Tobyverse)|Ulysses Burns' Story]]
-[[The Tobyverse Players]]
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