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It was only after the disappearance of Danielle, a peasant shepherdess of my Father’s lands, that I learned of the terrible Curse that the Ambrosios had lain upon my very soul. A curse  that to this day prevents me from marriage or even the most banal romantic dalliance.  
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It was only after the disappearance of Danielle, a peasant shepherdess of my Father’s lands, that I learned of the terrible Curse that the Ambrosios had lain upon my very soul. A curse  that to this day prevents me from marriage or even the common romantic dalliance.  
  
  
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When she returned to the castle, my Mother questioned me closely about what had happened and especially about what Danielle and I had been doing in the woods that fateful day.  It was only then that she confessed to me that an Ambrosios magician had appeared to her on the day of my birth and pronounced a curse upon me, such that any woman that I should have feelings for would come to an awful end.  At the time, I thought did not believe it, but events that hvae happened since that day have proven her veracity.  
 
When she returned to the castle, my Mother questioned me closely about what had happened and especially about what Danielle and I had been doing in the woods that fateful day.  It was only then that she confessed to me that an Ambrosios magician had appeared to her on the day of my birth and pronounced a curse upon me, such that any woman that I should have feelings for would come to an awful end.  At the time, I thought did not believe it, but events that hvae happened since that day have proven her veracity.  
  
Soon after this, Father transferred Mother's title and lands of Valentin to my name and I lead forth with a small army to retake it from the Ambrosios.
 
  
  
I did see Danielle one more time after that.  It was many years later, just after my great victory at Baelo Claudia. Danielle was found in the command tent of the Ambrosios wearing no less than the full armour and weapons of my foes. She had grown into a fine, beautiful woman and her armour was well tailored to flatter her figure. That evening she dined in my tent with me and my officers. She claimed that the sow had carried her off to the south, to the lands of the Ambrosios. There she to have had many fantastical adventures in the lands of their lands  and even made claim  that she was not originally from Lyonesse at all
 
  
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I did see Danielle one more time after that.  Shortly after my great victory at Baelo Claudia, she was captured in the command tent of the Ambrosios wearing no less than the full armour and weapons of my foes. She had grown into a fine, beautiful woman and her armour was well tailored to flatter her figure. That evening she dined in my tent with me and my officers. She claimed that the sow had carried her off to the south, to the lands of the Ambrosios. There she to have had many fantastical adventures in the lands of their lands  and even made claim  that she was not originally from Lyonesse at all
  
 
I felt no small pity for the woman, for as beautiful as she had become, and as detailed and fantastical as her tales were, it was clear that her mind had snapped during her long captivity.  Lands beyond the Ambrosios? Ridiculous!
 
I felt no small pity for the woman, for as beautiful as she had become, and as detailed and fantastical as her tales were, it was clear that her mind had snapped during her long captivity.  Lands beyond the Ambrosios? Ridiculous!
 
  
 
When it became clear that I did not believe her, she even claimed that we were related. This was becoming too much to bear.  Still she had once been my dear friend and it was clear that she had suffered greatly during her long captivity.  
 
When it became clear that I did not believe her, she even claimed that we were related. This was becoming too much to bear.  Still she had once been my dear friend and it was clear that she had suffered greatly during her long captivity.  
 
  
 
My dear friend Baron Sancha suggested, and I agreed, that was best that she be sent to the Abbey at Gallina Drac. I have not seen her since that night
 
My dear friend Baron Sancha suggested, and I agreed, that was best that she be sent to the Abbey at Gallina Drac. I have not seen her since that night

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