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"Sorry sir, I didn't mean to take your daughter away." Dav backed up. He knew how it might look, and he'd kill any man that would take advantage of a child.  
 
"Sorry sir, I didn't mean to take your daughter away." Dav backed up. He knew how it might look, and he'd kill any man that would take advantage of a child.  
  
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"No prolem, Captain." The man said. "I am not fortunate enough to be related to this charming princess. Just a friend, like you." His eyes had caught Dav's hesitation and he seemed to see the Marine as he really was. "Perhaps I can stop by later and visit?"
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"No prolem, Captain." The man said. "I am not fortunately enough to be related to this charming princess. Just a friend, like you." His eyes had caught Dav's hesitation and he seemed to see the Marine as he really was. "Perhaps I can stop by later and visit?"
  
 
"Yeah, sure. Dav. Name's Captain Dav Renox, Imperial Mariens." He looked down at himself. "At least for a while, yet. Not sure my career will continue on much longer."
 
"Yeah, sure. Dav. Name's Captain Dav Renox, Imperial Mariens." He looked down at himself. "At least for a while, yet. Not sure my career will continue on much longer."

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