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The people of the Crimson Fold are the survivors of the fall of the Terran Sphere. Their world had been home to an Ascendant culture and during the fall, a biome destroying nanoplague was unleashed on the world. It destroyed the atmosphere and every living plant it came into contact with.  
 
The people of the Crimson Fold are the survivors of the fall of the Terran Sphere. Their world had been home to an Ascendant culture and during the fall, a biome destroying nanoplague was unleashed on the world. It destroyed the atmosphere and every living plant it came into contact with.  
  
In defense, nano-resistant domes were constructed and the survivors herded into them. Then the Ascendant either fell, or uplifted into the afterlife, leaving behind a collection of bewildered survivors, trapped inside their secure domes.  
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In defense, nano-resistant domes were constructed and the survivors herded into them. Then the Ascendant either fell, or uplifted into the afterlife, leaving behind a collection of bewildered survivors, trapped inside the secure domes.  
  
 
Over the centuries, the old ways were relearned, technology rediscovered, ancient transportation systems repaired and reestablished, and soon the domes were thriving beacons of life. New domes were constructed and while they were not up to the levels the original domes were at, they were more than adequate to deal with the world as it had become, a carbon dioxide powered greenhouse world. Temperatures were above the boiling point of water, rendering the world dry as a bone.  
 
Over the centuries, the old ways were relearned, technology rediscovered, ancient transportation systems repaired and reestablished, and soon the domes were thriving beacons of life. New domes were constructed and while they were not up to the levels the original domes were at, they were more than adequate to deal with the world as it had become, a carbon dioxide powered greenhouse world. Temperatures were above the boiling point of water, rendering the world dry as a bone.  
  
 
In this Hell was forged a highly dedicated people, all dedicated to the survival of their kind. The reopened the slipknots in their system and went looking for other survivors. They live by strict rules and regulations, their children are notoriously well behaved and polite, and destructive behaviors are ruthlessly weeded out of society. Newcomers to Crimson Fold, find life there to oppressive and bleak.
 
In this Hell was forged a highly dedicated people, all dedicated to the survival of their kind. The reopened the slipknots in their system and went looking for other survivors. They live by strict rules and regulations, their children are notoriously well behaved and polite, and destructive behaviors are ruthlessly weeded out of society. Newcomers to Crimson Fold, find life there to oppressive and bleak.

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