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==Peleps Taric Onais==
 
==Peleps Taric Onais==
 
*Aspect: Water
 
*Aspect: Water
*Concept: Spyhunter of the All-Seeing Eye
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*Concept: Spymaster of the All-Seeing Eye
*Motivation: Keep the Eye free of outside influence
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*Motivation:  
*Anima: A gently undulating pool of dark water, accompanied by the sounds of waves lapping a shoreline; as the banner grows in strength, the waves grow violent, and the sound is that of the sea smashing against cliffs.
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*Anima:  
*Anima Power: For 5m, ignores environmental penalties from water, can breathe underwater, and can walk across water as if it were land.
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*Anima Power:  
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===Description===
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*TBD
  
 
===Attributes===
 
===Attributes===
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===Abilities===
 
===Abilities===
 
''Caste''
 
''Caste''
*Bureaucracy 5 (Finding corruption +2)
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*Bureaucracy 5 (Finding corruption x1)
*Investigation 5 (Counter-intelligence +3)
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*Investigation 5 (Counter-intelligence x1)
*Larceny 3
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*Larceny 2
 
*Martial Arts 3
 
*Martial Arts 3
  
 
''Favored''
 
''Favored''
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*Awareness 4 (Noticing details x1)
 
*Linguistics 4 (High Realm, Low Realm, Seatongue, Skytongue, Rivertongue)
 
*Linguistics 4 (High Realm, Low Realm, Seatongue, Skytongue, Rivertongue)
*Lore 3 (Gateway +3)
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*Presence 3 (Interrogation x1)
*Integrity 5
 
  
 
''Other''
 
''Other''
 
*Archery 1
 
*Archery 1
*Awareness 3
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*Craft 3 (Air 3, Wood 2, Water 1)
*Craft 2 (Air 2, Water 1)
 
 
*Dodge 2
 
*Dodge 2
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*Integrity 3
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*Lore 3
 
*Melee 2
 
*Melee 2
 
*Occult 3
 
*Occult 3
 
*Performance 2
 
*Performance 2
*Presence 3
 
 
*Resistance 2
 
*Resistance 2
 
*Ride 1
 
*Ride 1
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===Backgrounds===
 
===Backgrounds===
 
''General''
 
''General''
*Allies 1 (Enuma Preven, House Iselsi protege)
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*Allies 2 (Dynast Wife & House Iselsi protege)
*Artifact 2
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*Artifact 3 (TBD)
*Backing 4 (All-Seeing Eye)
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*Backing 5 (All-Seeing Eye)
 
*Backing 3 (Imperial Treasury)
 
*Backing 3 (Imperial Treasury)
 
*Breeding 3
 
*Breeding 3
 
*Connections 5 (All-Seeing Eye)
 
*Connections 5 (All-Seeing Eye)
*Connections 2 (Thousand Scales)
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*Connections 3 (Thousand Scales)
*Connections 1 (Magistracy)
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*Connections 2 (Magistracy)
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*Connections 2 (Scarlet Empress's Court)
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*Connections 1 (Deliberative)
 
*Henchmen 3 (Favored agents of the Eye)
 
*Henchmen 3 (Favored agents of the Eye)
 
*Manse 3 (Eye & Treasury manses to which he's attuned)
 
*Manse 3 (Eye & Treasury manses to which he's attuned)
*Reputation 3 (Someone who knows how to navigate the Imperial Bureaucracy)
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*Reputation 2 (Someone who knows how to navigate the Imperial Bureaucracy)
 
*Resources 2
 
*Resources 2
*Retainers 1 (His personal secretary, plus his immediate underlings at the Treasury & the Eye)
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*Retainers 2 (His personal secretary, plus his immediate underlings at the Treasury & the Eye)
  
 
===Charms===
 
===Charms===
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*2 Charms TBD
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''Awareness''
 
''Awareness''
*1st Awareness Excellency
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*2nd Awareness Excellency
 
*Sense-Riding Technique
 
*Sense-Riding Technique
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*All-Encompassing Earth Sense
  
 
''Bureaucracy''
 
''Bureaucracy''
*1st Bureaucracy Excellency
 
 
*Confluence of Savant Thought
 
*Confluence of Savant Thought
 
*Geese Flying South Administration
 
*Geese Flying South Administration
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*1st Integrity Excellency
 
*1st Integrity Excellency
 
*Oath of the Ten-Thousand Dragons
 
*Oath of the Ten-Thousand Dragons
*Ten-Thousand Dragons Fight as One
 
*Granite Curtain of Serenity
 
  
 
''Investigation''
 
''Investigation''
*1st Investigation Excellency
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*2nd Investigation Excellency
*Terrestrial Investigation Reinforcement
 
 
*Scent of Crime Method
 
*Scent of Crime Method
 
*Falsehood Unearthing Attitude
 
*Falsehood Unearthing Attitude
 
*Revelation of Associates Hunch
 
*Revelation of Associates Hunch
 
*Tampering Detection Technique
 
*Tampering Detection Technique
*Heart-Maze Navigation
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*Exposing the Untrue Heart Method (Custom, Pending)
  
 
''Larceny''
 
''Larceny''
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''Linguistics''
 
''Linguistics''
 
*1st Linguistics Excellency
 
*1st Linguistics Excellency
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*Poisoned-Tongue Technique
 
*Language Learning Ritual
 
*Language Learning Ritual
 
*Cipher Missive
 
*Cipher Missive
*Poisoned-Tongue Technique
 
 
*Voice of Mastery
 
*Voice of Mastery
*Wind-Carried Words
 
*Voices on the Wind
 
  
''Lore''
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''Occult''
*1st Lore Excellency
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*Terrestrial Circle Sorcery
*Elemental Concentration Technique
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*Emerald Countermagic
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*Infallible Messenger
  
===Virtues===
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''Presence''
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*Glowing Coal Radiance
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==Virtues==
 
*Compassion 2
 
*Compassion 2
 
*Conviction 4
 
*Conviction 4
*Temperance 4
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*Temperance 3
*Valor 1
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*Valor 2
 
 
===Other traits===
 
Essence 4
 
*Personal motes 15
 
*Peripheral motes 36
 
*Committed motes (peripheral) TBD
 
 
 
Willpower 8
 
  
===Intimacies===
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==Other traits==
*House Peleps Taric (loyalty)
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Essence 3
*The All-Seeing Eye (commitment)
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*Personal motes 13
*His brother, Grolush (fraternal love)
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*Peripheral motes 33
*His adopted son, Korel (protective)
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*Committed motes (peripheral) X
*His protege, Enuma Preven (affection)
 
  
===Artifacts and Panoply===
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Willpower 7
'''Artifacts''' (4 dots total, none above 2)
 
*Reinforced Buff Jacket
 
*Hearthstone Amulet x2
 
  
'''Hearthstones''' (6 dots total, none above 3)
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==Intimacies==
*Bloodstone
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*TBD
*Gemstone of Surface Thoughts
 
*Memory Stone
 
  
===Defense Values===
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==Artifacts and Panalopy==
*DDV: 4 [(Dex + Dodge + Ess)/2]
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*TBD
*PDV 2/3 [(Dex + Mel/MA + Weapon)/2]
 
*DMDV: 8 [(WP + Int + Ess)/2]
 
*PMDV: 4 [(Man + Pre/Soc)/2]
 
  
===Bonus points===
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==Bonus points==
 
*Attributes: 0 bp
 
*Attributes: 0 bp
*Abilities: 9 bp (7 aspect/favored dots, 2 for 4 specialties)
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*Abilities: 6 bp (6 aspect/favored dots)
*Charms: 5 bp  
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*Charms: 0 bp (0 aspect/favored charms)
*Backgrounds: 18 bp (6 [3 dots for 4+] + 12 [12 dots for 3 & under])
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*Backgrounds: 27 bp (8 [4 dots for 4+] + 19 [19 dots for 3 & under])
*Virtues/Willpower/Essence: 13 bp (10 from Essence, 3 from Willpower)
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*Virtues/Willpower/Essence: 2 bp (2 from Willpower)
 
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*10 bps unspent
===Experience Points===
 
*10 xp banked
 
  
 
==Backstory, Details, &c.==
 
==Backstory, Details, &c.==
===Description===
 
Onais possesses none of the physical graces that commoners often associate with the majestic Princes of the Earth; he appears to possess neither overwhelming power, nor exceptional grace, nor divine hardiness.  His looks could charitably be described as 'average', even if he weren't inclined to dress as modestly -- even shabbily -- as his station permits, and even if his frame didn't testify to a life dedicated to never missing a meal or a drink.  While he's often a welcome presence at social gatherings -- he's quick to laugh and slow to anger, always ready to raise a glass or pass along a dish -- he's also no one's idea of a magnetic personality.
 
 
Only those closest to him, or those who have saw him in his youth playing at Gateway, or those who are exceptionally perceptive can see why the Dragons chose him: the glint in his eyes as he reads a room, the slight smile as he takes the perfect measure of those before him , the gentle calm as he navigates the thorniest problems, and the no-nonsense self-assurance in his voice when his words inevitably find their mark.
 
 
 
===Questionnaire===
 
===Questionnaire===
 
'''1) Why are you devoted to keeping this sub-House alive against all odds?'''
 
'''1) Why are you devoted to keeping this sub-House alive against all odds?'''
  
Onais never wholly outgrew a son's awe of his father, and to do less than defend his memory & his legacy now is unthinkable to him. Moreover, the fact that he's used his position within the Eye to aid the family on occasion was trivial while Taric was a power in Dynastic politics; a weakened House leaves Onais exposed on that score.  
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Onais never wholly outgrew a son's awe of his father, and to do less than defend his memory & his legacy now is unthinkable to him. Moreover, the fact that he's used his position within the Eye to aid the family on occasion was trivial while Taric was a power in Dynastic politics; a weakened House leaves Onais exposed on that score. And last, Onais is very eager to renew his relationship with his sister Aisha, on whom he had quite a crush as a young man.
  
 
'''2) The Dynasty isn't all about family. What loyalties and causes compete with your loyalty to House Peleps Taric?'''
 
'''2) The Dynasty isn't all about family. What loyalties and causes compete with your loyalty to House Peleps Taric?'''
  
Though intensely loyal to his family, it has been in the All-Seeing Eye that Onais became his own man, and through which he forged his own legacy and destiny. He is thoroughly devoted to its mission, in his role as one of the primary agents of the Inward-Looking Eye.
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Though intensely loyal to his family, it has been in the All-Seeing Eye that Onais became his own man, and through which he forged his own legacy and destiny. He is thoroughly devoted to its mission.
  
 
'''3) In what ways are you products of the Dynasty?'''  
 
'''3) In what ways are you products of the Dynasty?'''  
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'''5) What weaknesses do you possess that aren't just personal failings, but could be exploited by your enemies to cost you the Game of Thrones? What are the fields of engagement where you can't just apply Game Theory analysis, but instead will act against your own interests?'''
 
'''5) What weaknesses do you possess that aren't just personal failings, but could be exploited by your enemies to cost you the Game of Thrones? What are the fields of engagement where you can't just apply Game Theory analysis, but instead will act against your own interests?'''
  
As a matter of official policy, the Eye demands its members abstain from House politicking; some activity in that latter regard is overlooked, even expected; but full-on engagement is very much frowned upon. Another potential weakness is his (more than professional) interest in his protege, Enuma Preven, a sorcerer & assassion of House Iselsi; he reminds Onais of all that he loves in Grolush & Aisha both.
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As a matter of official policy, the Eye demands its members abstain from House politicking; some activity in that latter regard is overlooked, even expected; but full-on engagement is very much frowned upon. Another potential weakness is his (more than professional) interest in his protege, Enuma Prevan, a sorcerer & assassion of House Iselsi; she reminds him very much of his sister Aisha.
  
 
===Onais on his Family===
 
===Onais on his Family===
'''Alaric''' -- All honor to dear father's brother!  Even setting aside his preternatural grace, he is entitled to unfailing respect on that account, and his steady good sense is essential. The ceaseless piety, the perfect humility -- that, I confess, I can do without.
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'''Alaric''' -- All honor to dear father's brother!  Even setting aside his preternatural grace, he is entitled to unfailing respect on that account. The ceaseless piety, the perfect humility -- that, I confess, I can do without.
  
 
'''Pranzha''' -- Now that father has been taken from us, I find dear Pranzha's tales as welcome as I did as a youth. But whereas they once struck me as ornament, now I see them as the armor that safeguards Taric's glory.  His role is vital in the tests to come.
 
'''Pranzha''' -- Now that father has been taken from us, I find dear Pranzha's tales as welcome as I did as a youth. But whereas they once struck me as ornament, now I see them as the armor that safeguards Taric's glory.  His role is vital in the tests to come.
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'''Hayabusa''' -- Who has not enjoyed a walk through a garden, come across a bloom of surpassing beauty, leaned in to appreciate its scent -- and found there the presentiment of rot? She unsettles me, but she does have the nicest parties.
 
'''Hayabusa''' -- Who has not enjoyed a walk through a garden, come across a bloom of surpassing beauty, leaned in to appreciate its scent -- and found there the presentiment of rot? She unsettles me, but she does have the nicest parties.
  
'''Aisha''' -- My dearest sister; her visits were outcroppings of joy on my youth's terrain. To renew our relationship in this time of struggle is to find a green shoot reaching heavenward on a blasted plain.  Truth be told, I suspect she needs me.
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'''Aisha''' -- My dearest sister; her visits were outcroppings of joy on my youth's terrain. To renew our relationship in this time of struggle is to find a green shoot reaching heavenward on a blasted plain.
  
'''Sikandi''' -- I could hardly believe the news when it came! I, who pride myself on seeing three moves ahead, taken off guard! I'd hardly be able to forgive her, were her newfound position (to say nothing of her competence) not so damned welcome.
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'''Hinoko''' -- In my garden, I have climbing roses that, over the years, have grown to great heights thanks to a strong bamboo trellis; on the rare occasions a guest is invited there, they are always taken by the roses. For my part, I have come to appreciate the trellis.
  
'''Grolush''' -- He had all that I wished to have as a boy: good looks, a strong body, and most of all, father's attention.  I suppose I should be jealous of him, but I can't bring myself to feel anything but love.
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'''Sikandi''' -- I could hardly believe the news when it came! I, who pride myself on seeing three moves ahead, taken off guard! I'd hardly be able to forgive her, were her newfound position (to say nothing of her competence!) not so damned welcome.
  
'''Taen''' -- A wretched, spoiled little boy.  Fortunately, there are uses for those such as him. As our enemies encircle us, he'll make a most convenient and obvious target to draw them out.  And if he comes through, perhaps he'll even learn a bit of prudence.
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'''Grolush''' -- A most familiar story: two brothers, constantly in competition as youths, become thick as thieves when grown. Less familiar is the businesses the brothers came to take up.
  
'''Korel''' -- The very emblem of my success, though none may recognize him as such.  I suspect that secrecy keeps him at arm's length; my life and my work are as foreign to him as is Lookshy to meHow ironic it is that this adoptee is more like my father than his eldest son.
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'''Taen''' -- Some plants grow moderately, building a firm foundation of roots and thick nest of leaves before displaying their flowers. Others cannot wait to display their glory, blooming with barely a root in the ground or a leaf searching for sun. It is the latter that require the steady hand of the skilled horticulturalist, but also that have the most potential.
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'''Korel''' -- The very emblem of my success, and for that reason he is both my pride and a vulnerability.   
  
 
'''Medoina''' -- A sensible (not to say profitable!) young woman, befitting a fellow product of the Spiral; she is a credit to our family, and a boon to our family's credit.
 
'''Medoina''' -- A sensible (not to say profitable!) young woman, befitting a fellow product of the Spiral; she is a credit to our family, and a boon to our family's credit.
 
'''Noltis''' -- A Dynast of estimable talents, and a most worthy match for young Medoina.  One of these days, I must get to know him better.  Much, much better.
 

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