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She walks away. As she does, she may just have a little sway in her hips that wasn't there before.  
 
She walks away. As she does, she may just have a little sway in her hips that wasn't there before.  
  
The crew breaths a sigh of relief and quickly boards the cargo container. Injured persons are taken to the ward room, Jake's body is placed in the cold storage. As they enter, Joshua gets his first glimpse at the ship that will become his home.
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The crew breaths a sigh of relief and quickly boards the cargo container. Injured persons are taken to the ward room, Jake's body is placed in the cold storage. As then enter. Joshua gets his first glimpse at the ship that will become his home.
  
 
'''Christian:''' Welcome aboard Summer's Gift. I'll show you toward your room.<br>
 
'''Christian:''' Welcome aboard Summer's Gift. I'll show you toward your room.<br>

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