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As soon as he speaks, the ER unit begins to work anew. Operating quickly and efficiently, they begin to clean wounds, mend ripped veins, and suture the many nasty cuts inflicted by the Reavers.  
 
As soon as he speaks, the ER unit begins to work anew. Operating quickly and efficiently, they begin to clean wounds, mend ripped veins, and suture the many nasty cuts inflicted by the Reavers.  
  
Meanwhile, the strange Joshua stands observing the third doctor administering to Rick. After about five minutes Joshua begins to nod and follow the movements with his hands, ten minutes later, he is anticipating the next moves. After fifteen the doctor looks haggard and tired, he looks up for someone to step in and either take over or assist. But with no surgeon on call, and the other two working feverishly on Nika, there is no one in sight. With too many clamps embedded in Rick's abdomen to handle he enlists Joshua to hold one. A nurse questions his calling on a civilian.  
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Meanwhile, the strange Joshua stands observing the third doctor administering to Rick. After about five minutes Joshua begins to nod and follow the movements with his hands, ten minutes later, he is anticipating the next moves. After fifteen the doctor looks haggard and tired, he looks up for someone to step in and either take over or assist. But with no surgeon on call, and the other two working feverishly on Nika, there is no one in sight. With too many clamp embedded in Rick's abdomen to handle he enlists Joshua to hold one. A nurse questions his calling on a civilian.  
  
 
As if awoken from an trance, Joshua steps into the position and expertly takes hold of the clamps. He deftly pulls them gently aside exposing a severed artery to the doctor. He assists ably; in fact, about half way through the surgery the attending doctor slips up and doesn't notice that he sliced through an artery. Joshua grabs another clamp from the table and slaps it on the vessel saving Rick from a likely death.
 
As if awoken from an trance, Joshua steps into the position and expertly takes hold of the clamps. He deftly pulls them gently aside exposing a severed artery to the doctor. He assists ably; in fact, about half way through the surgery the attending doctor slips up and doesn't notice that he sliced through an artery. Joshua grabs another clamp from the table and slaps it on the vessel saving Rick from a likely death.

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