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'''Arden:''' We got attacked by bad things.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' We got attacked by bad things.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Best laid plans, humped by Rebels.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Best laid plans, humped by Rebels.<br>
'''Christian:''' So, apparently some Independents got on board the ship, there was an op, they were taken care of. Some people were hurt one killed. Once they are stabilized, we'll be transferring them to a civilian hospital to get them out of your hair.<br>
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'''Christian:''' So, apparently some Independents got on board the ship, there was an op, they were taken care of. Some people were hurt one killed. Once they are stabilized, we'll be transferring them to a civilian hospital to get the out of your hair.<br>
  
 
The chief nurse is looking skeptical at all this. Something smells wrong. Christian senses her feelings and goes to persuade her. He smiles and turns on the charm.  
 
The chief nurse is looking skeptical at all this. Something smells wrong. Christian senses her feelings and goes to persuade her. He smiles and turns on the charm.  
He works his magic and convinces her that she doesn't need to worry about this.  Still she seems to be pretty dedicated to her job, and needs to be confident that she is doing her job. Christian changes tactics, and works to make it right.  
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He works his magic and convinces her that she doesn't need to worry about this.  Still she seems to be pretty dedicated to her job, and needs to be confident that she is doing her job. Christian changes tactics, and works to made it right.  
  
 
'''Nurse:''' (resigned) All I need is the basic information, names, conditions, cause of injuries, kinds of injuries, treatments, etc...<br>
 
'''Nurse:''' (resigned) All I need is the basic information, names, conditions, cause of injuries, kinds of injuries, treatments, etc...<br>
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'''Arden:''' Absolutely.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Absolutely.<br>
  
Arden seems satisfied in his classic no nonsense way. Christian watches Joshua intently, trying to make sense of this stranger's behavior. A career officer appears to be abandoning his ship and station, betraying the navy and fleeing with them.
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Arden seems satisfied in his classic no nonsense way. Christian watches Joshua intently trying to make sense of this stranger's behavior. A career officer appears to be abandoning his ship and station, betraying the navy and fleeing with them.
  
 
Arden sneaks a couple of boxes of medical supplies under the gurneys. The crew maneuvers the gurneys into the tram, and takes it back to the loading dock where the Summer's Gift awaits.  
 
Arden sneaks a couple of boxes of medical supplies under the gurneys. The crew maneuvers the gurneys into the tram, and takes it back to the loading dock where the Summer's Gift awaits.  

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