Editing Episode 218: Captive Audience, Part 2

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'''Day Three:'''  On our suggestion, Joshua’s focusing on imitating the voices of the pirate crew.  He’s starting to feel the effects of withdrawal from his meds and it helps take his mind off things.  He comes up with a voice we haven’t heard before.
 
'''Day Three:'''  On our suggestion, Joshua’s focusing on imitating the voices of the pirate crew.  He’s starting to feel the effects of withdrawal from his meds and it helps take his mind off things.  He comes up with a voice we haven’t heard before.
  
'''Joshua:''' “Just leave this to Jack.  I’m gonna to take care of this.  I’m gonna make it all go away, but I gotta have your trust. We can make this go away.  We can make this work for us.”
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'''Joshua:'' “Just leave this to Jack.  I’m gonna to take care of this.  I’m gonna make it all go away, but I gotta have your trust. We can make this go away.  We can make this work for us.”
  
 
Leave what? Make what go away?  What’s going to work for whom? And who’s Jack?
 
Leave what? Make what go away?  What’s going to work for whom? And who’s Jack?
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'''Joshua:''' What one? The one about the Senator’s aide…the one about ‘fifteen and two for the Senator, too’?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' What one? The one about the Senator’s aide…the one about ‘fifteen and two for the Senator, too’?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' No, the one about Jack.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' No, the one about Jack.<br>
'''Joshua:''' Which one about Jack,…um….Did I say something about…Jack? I don’t remember that particular punchline.<br>
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'''Joshua:'' Which one about Jack,…um….Did I say something about…Jack? I don’t remember that particular punchline.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' You said something that caught my interest and I was wondering if you could do it again.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' You said something that caught my interest and I was wondering if you could do it again.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' (cringing, waving hands, shaking head) No..no,no,no..nope.  No. Don’t remember it. Sorry.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' (cringing, waving hands, shaking head) No..no,no,no..nope.  No. Don’t remember it. Sorry.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' It’s okay.  Stay calm.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' It’s okay.  Stay calm.<br>
'''Joshua:''' No I’m calm…. I’m calm…. I’m very calm.  Very calm.<br>
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'''Joshua:'' No I’m calm…. I’m calm…. I’m very calm.  Very calm.<br>
  
 
Not really, but managing.
 
Not really, but managing.
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Mary demurs, saying Arden’s been a confusing case.  Going back and forth between being strangely cooperative to uncooperative.  They had to fight him to take his gun away.  The rest of the crew does’t trust him, to be quite honest, and she doesn’t really either.  
 
Mary demurs, saying Arden’s been a confusing case.  Going back and forth between being strangely cooperative to uncooperative.  They had to fight him to take his gun away.  The rest of the crew does’t trust him, to be quite honest, and she doesn’t really either.  
  
'''Joshua:''' Trust is a valuable commodity.<br>
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'''Joshua:'' Trust is a valuable commodity.<br>
 
'''Rick:''' Do you trust any of us?<br>
 
'''Rick:''' Do you trust any of us?<br>
 
'''Mary:''' Well….I mean, you look like you’re suffering so I’ll see if I can give you something.<br>
 
'''Mary:''' Well….I mean, you look like you’re suffering so I’ll see if I can give you something.<br>
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Everyone looks at Mary.  She looks across the room to the dark haired man.
 
Everyone looks at Mary.  She looks across the room to the dark haired man.
  
'''Mary:''' (very quietly) Do what you have to do.  
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'''Mary:'' (very quietly) Do what you have to do.  
  
 
Watching this through his dream haze, Joshua whimpers.
 
Watching this through his dream haze, Joshua whimpers.
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'''Joshua:''' Yeah, I can draw….draw decently.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Yeah, I can draw….draw decently.<br>
  
Rina sacrifices a tightly rolled card from her deck to her lighter, charring it to make an improvised pencil.  Nika asks him to draw the people from the dream she’d overhead him dreaming the day before, the one where someone is saying they could make it all go away.  It's not the best set of tools or situation, but Joshua clearly has some talent and manages to sketch his portraits on the deck in one of the rooms, out of sight of our captors.  They're done well enough that we can ascertain that Jack is no one we’ve seen before.
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Rina sacrifices a tightly rolled card from her deck to her lighter, charring it to make an improvised pencil.  Nika asks him to draw the people from the dream she’d overhead him dreaming the day before, the one where someone is saying they could make it all go away.  Joshua is no artist, but he manages to sketch his portraits on the deck in one of the rooms, out of sight of our captors.  He manages to do them well enough that we can ascertain that Jack is no one we’ve seen before.
  
 
Joshua looks at his work and asks Rick to give him the mushrooms, hoping they prevent the dreams, maybe, because they are really distressing.  Besides, he could die at any minute—it’s Day Four.  Nika declares she’s not happy with that state of affairs, she doesn’t want him  to die.  Joshua quickly adds he doesn’t feel like he’s going to die, but…well…he’s hurting and it’s all very weird.
 
Joshua looks at his work and asks Rick to give him the mushrooms, hoping they prevent the dreams, maybe, because they are really distressing.  Besides, he could die at any minute—it’s Day Four.  Nika declares she’s not happy with that state of affairs, she doesn’t want him  to die.  Joshua quickly adds he doesn’t feel like he’s going to die, but…well…he’s hurting and it’s all very weird.
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'''Day Seven:''' Joshua’s getting really rocky now.  He’s seven days off his meds and things just aren’t right with him anymore.  He mumbles and talks to himself, gestures to things that aren’t there.  Under his mattress we find a ton of scratches, graffiti-like, a mishmash of the United Reclamation logo, words like ‘blood’ and ‘blood bond’ and “Vane”, “Wyrm’s Tongue”, “Remember”, and “Kingston”  and “distress call”, “MURDER” and “MASS MURDER”  being prominent.  How the scratched writing/drawings came to be under his mattress he cannot say.  His fingers are bruised, but there’s nothing to explain how he could have scratched the words into the metal platform holding the mattress off the floor.
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Day Seven:  Joshua’s getting really rocky now.  He’s seven days off his meds and things just aren’t right with him anymore.  He mumbles and talks to himself, gestures to things that aren’t there.  Under his mattress we find a ton of scratches, graffiti-like, a mishmash of the United Reclamation logo, words like ‘blood’ and ‘blood bond’ and “Vane”, “Wyrm’s Tongue”, “Remember”, and “Kingston”  and “distress call”, “MURDER” and “MASS MURDER”  being prominent.  How the scratched writing/drawings came to be under his mattress he cannot say.  His fingers are bruised, but there’s nothing to explain how he could have scratched the words into the metal platform holding the mattress off the floor.
  
 
Mary and Fei Wu Ling show up that evening with Joshua’s meds and administer a small dose.  After being off his meds for so long, Joshua isn’t sure he can believe that relief is coming. It’s a little easier to believe when they leave a small supply with Joshua and shut us in again.
 
Mary and Fei Wu Ling show up that evening with Joshua’s meds and administer a small dose.  After being off his meds for so long, Joshua isn’t sure he can believe that relief is coming. It’s a little easier to believe when they leave a small supply with Joshua and shut us in again.

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