Editing Episode 218: Captive Audience, Part 2

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'''Joshua:''' Yeah, I can draw….draw decently.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Yeah, I can draw….draw decently.<br>
  
Rina sacrifices a tightly rolled card from her deck to her lighter, charring it to make an improvised pencil.  Nika asks him to draw the people from the dream she’d overhead him dreaming the day before, the one where someone is saying they could make it all go away.  It's not the best set of tools or situation, but Joshua clearly has some talent and manages to sketch his portraits on the deck in one of the rooms, out of sight of our captors.  They're done well enough that we can ascertain that Jack is no one we’ve seen before.
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Rina sacrifices a tightly rolled card from her deck to her lighter, charring it to make an improvised pencil.  Nika asks him to draw the people from the dream she’d overhead him dreaming the day before, the one where someone is saying they could make it all go away.  Joshua is no artist, but he manages to sketch his portraits on the deck in one of the rooms, out of sight of our captors.  He manages to do them well enough that we can ascertain that Jack is no one we’ve seen before.
  
 
Joshua looks at his work and asks Rick to give him the mushrooms, hoping they prevent the dreams, maybe, because they are really distressing.  Besides, he could die at any minute—it’s Day Four.  Nika declares she’s not happy with that state of affairs, she doesn’t want him  to die.  Joshua quickly adds he doesn’t feel like he’s going to die, but…well…he’s hurting and it’s all very weird.
 
Joshua looks at his work and asks Rick to give him the mushrooms, hoping they prevent the dreams, maybe, because they are really distressing.  Besides, he could die at any minute—it’s Day Four.  Nika declares she’s not happy with that state of affairs, she doesn’t want him  to die.  Joshua quickly adds he doesn’t feel like he’s going to die, but…well…he’s hurting and it’s all very weird.
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'''Day Seven:''' Joshua’s getting really rocky now.  He’s seven days off his meds and things just aren’t right with him anymore.  He mumbles and talks to himself, gestures to things that aren’t there.  Under his mattress we find a ton of scratches, graffiti-like, a mishmash of the United Reclamation logo, words like ‘blood’ and ‘blood bond’ and “Vane”, “Wyrm’s Tongue”, “Remember”, and “Kingston”  and “distress call”, “MURDER” and “MASS MURDER”  being prominent.  How the scratched writing/drawings came to be under his mattress he cannot say.  His fingers are bruised, but there’s nothing to explain how he could have scratched the words into the metal platform holding the mattress off the floor.
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Day Seven:  Joshua’s getting really rocky now.  He’s seven days off his meds and things just aren’t right with him anymore.  He mumbles and talks to himself, gestures to things that aren’t there.  Under his mattress we find a ton of scratches, graffiti-like, a mishmash of the United Reclamation logo, words like ‘blood’ and ‘blood bond’ and “Vane”, “Wyrm’s Tongue”, “Remember”, and “Kingston”  and “distress call”, “MURDER” and “MASS MURDER”  being prominent.  How the scratched writing/drawings came to be under his mattress he cannot say.  His fingers are bruised, but there’s nothing to explain how he could have scratched the words into the metal platform holding the mattress off the floor.
  
 
Mary and Fei Wu Ling show up that evening with Joshua’s meds and administer a small dose.  After being off his meds for so long, Joshua isn’t sure he can believe that relief is coming. It’s a little easier to believe when they leave a small supply with Joshua and shut us in again.
 
Mary and Fei Wu Ling show up that evening with Joshua’s meds and administer a small dose.  After being off his meds for so long, Joshua isn’t sure he can believe that relief is coming. It’s a little easier to believe when they leave a small supply with Joshua and shut us in again.

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