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Bring it!
 
Bring it!
  
Rick  hears the screams of Wu Ling from the lower deck and moves to another aft hatch dropping down into the lower deck. Rick runs down the hall to intercept the fighters.
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Rick  hears the screams of Wu Ling from trick he lower deck and moves to another aft hatch dropping down into the lower deck. Rick runs down the hall to intercept the fighters.
  
 
Rina takes a wild pot shot at Wu Ling and attempts to dodge her knives. She takes a hit and pauses to catch her second wind. Arden joins her in the fray, they both take shots, and miss as Wu Ling flips away from them. Despite the engineer being the one bringing the gun to the knife fight, four more knives find their way into Rina before she can gain the cover of the upperdeck stairs. And the shock from the damage puts her on the deck, much like Wu Ling’s brother. Out for the count and fading fast.   
 
Rina takes a wild pot shot at Wu Ling and attempts to dodge her knives. She takes a hit and pauses to catch her second wind. Arden joins her in the fray, they both take shots, and miss as Wu Ling flips away from them. Despite the engineer being the one bringing the gun to the knife fight, four more knives find their way into Rina before she can gain the cover of the upperdeck stairs. And the shock from the damage puts her on the deck, much like Wu Ling’s brother. Out for the count and fading fast.   
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'''Joshua:''' You've got us, we've got you. There's no way that is going to end well. Remember we've got the ship.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' You've got us, we've got you. There's no way that is going to end well. Remember we've got the ship.<br>
 
'''Mary:''' No you don't.<br>
 
'''Mary:''' No you don't.<br>
'''Joshua:''' No I don't? Why would that be? I'm pretty sure most of our group is on the ship.<br>
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'''Joshua:''' No I don't? Why would that be? I'm pretty sure, most of our group is on the ship.<br>
 
'''Mary:''' You're inside the ship, but you ain't got the ship… We took a little bit with us.<br>
 
'''Mary:''' You're inside the ship, but you ain't got the ship… We took a little bit with us.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Alright, so we're gonna talk then?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Alright, so we're gonna talk then?<br>
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Mary looks a bit resigned, Then she holsters her pistol.
 
Mary looks a bit resigned, Then she holsters her pistol.
  
'''Mary:''' Okay.. There's my show, you give me something.<br>
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'''Mary:''' "Okay.. There's my show, you give me something."<br>
  
 
Nika steps out from the berm, gun at her shoulder.  
 
Nika steps out from the berm, gun at her shoulder.  
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'''Mary:''' Tom, put the gun away, you're gonna hurt yourself.<br>
 
'''Mary:''' Tom, put the gun away, you're gonna hurt yourself.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Cooper? Annie?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Cooper? Annie?<br>
'''Mary:''' Cooper.  We’ve been here before.  You did it for me, now let me do it for you.<br>  
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''Mary:''' Cooper.  We’ve been here before.  You did it for me, now let me do it for you.<br>  
  
 
Cooper stands up and makes himself visible.
 
Cooper stands up and makes himself visible.
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This will take some time, so once his presence is no longer needed in Med Bay, Rick goes and brings Rina up to the Wardroom to act as second surgery. <br>
 
This will take some time, so once his presence is no longer needed in Med Bay, Rick goes and brings Rina up to the Wardroom to act as second surgery. <br>
  
'''Rick:''' Since I am saving your life for the second time, I am really hoping you won't try to stab me as I carry up stairs. (He brings her up there)<br>
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'''Rick:''' Since I am saving your life for the second time, I am really hoping you want try to stab me as I carry up stairs. (He brings her up there)<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Okay. Put me down, anyone on the bridge? Do we need to secure the weapons? <br>
 
'''Rina:''' Okay. Put me down, anyone on the bridge? Do we need to secure the weapons? <br>
 
'''Rick:''' Rina, I mean this in whatever way it will keep me from getting killed. You are staying here, and that's an order. If that's okay with you.<br>
 
'''Rick:''' Rina, I mean this in whatever way it will keep me from getting killed. You are staying here, and that's an order. If that's okay with you.<br>
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'''Rick:''' Is there anything else you have on the ship that we should know about<br>
 
'''Rick:''' Is there anything else you have on the ship that we should know about<br>
'''Cooper:''' "Well, as we were acting as pirates, there might have been some, err looting and such previous to our friendly reconciliating, as such.<br>
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'''Cooper:''' "Well, as we were acting as pirates, their might have been some, err looting and such previous to our friendly reconciliating, as such.<br>
  
 
Sure enough the crew finds that the agents of redistribution has lightened their wallets considerably. No one has more than €20, and those with less than that, find the same €20 there.
 
Sure enough the crew finds that the agents of redistribution has lightened their wallets considerably. No one has more than €20, and those with less than that, find the same €20 there.
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'''Arden:''' I'd like to say that even though I am not 100% certain about all this, I am willing to let bygones be bygones, as long as nothing else goes sour. <br>
 
'''Arden:''' I'd like to say that even though I am not 100% certain about all this, I am willing to let bygones be bygones, as long as nothing else goes sour. <br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I think we can both get what we want out of this. You can get whatever it is your looking for in Blue Sun, we can get our ship back and be on our way. And no blood has to be spilled, and all's good.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I think we can both get what we want out of this. You can get whatever it is your looking for in Blue Sun, we can get our ship back and be on our way. And no blood has to be spilled, and all's good.<br>
'''Mary:''' It will take some time for wounds to heal, but I appreciate that, you (Arden) seem like a straight up fellow.<br>
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'''Mary:''' It will take some time for rounds to heal, but I appreciate that, you (Arden) seem like a straight up fellow.<br>
 
'''Arden:'''You mean I can't lie worth ''Mi Tian Gohn''."<br>
 
'''Arden:'''You mean I can't lie worth ''Mi Tian Gohn''."<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Me neither.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Me neither.<br>
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'''Annie:''' How do you do this?<br>
 
'''Annie:''' How do you do this?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' The dreaming or the voices?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' The dreaming or the voices?<br>
'''Nika:''' How are you so good with engines?<br>
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''Nika:''' How are you so good with engines?<br>
 
'''Annie:''' I ain't that good. (Nods from around her crew)<br>
 
'''Annie:''' I ain't that good. (Nods from around her crew)<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Alright, how does Tom fly as well as he does? It's instinct, it's something hardwired in him. Certain people have a talent. It's just like music, just like medicine.
 
'''Nika:''' Alright, how does Tom fly as well as he does? It's instinct, it's something hardwired in him. Certain people have a talent. It's just like music, just like medicine.
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*Nika thinks it is far more likely the Darkstar was destroyed by explosives, not a missile hit.  
 
*Nika thinks it is far more likely the Darkstar was destroyed by explosives, not a missile hit.  
  
'''Nika:''' Somebody sabotaged that ship. the blast pattern is too evenly spread to be a missile hit, it had to be explosives.<br>
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'''Nika:''' Somebody sabotaged that ship. the blast pattern is to evenly spread to be a missile hit, it had to be explosives.<br>
  
 
The crew decides to go from Lenore to Aberdeen. They leave the caustic environment of space near the Lenore, the remains of the Darkstar and whatever other ship was there, and pulses for Aberdeen.  
 
The crew decides to go from Lenore to Aberdeen. They leave the caustic environment of space near the Lenore, the remains of the Darkstar and whatever other ship was there, and pulses for Aberdeen.  

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