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We are all on the bridge and just staring at it.
 
We are all on the bridge and just staring at it.
  
'''Christian:''' I’m going to hazard a guess that we are not the first to respond to this distress signal.<br>
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Christian: I’m going to hazard a guess that we are not the first to respond to this distress signal.
'''Arden:''' Looks that way.
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Arden:  Looks that way.
  
 
Both of the Jian Seng’s shuttles are gone.
 
Both of the Jian Seng’s shuttles are gone.
  
'''Arden:''' Scan for life signs. <br>
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Arden:  Scan for life signs.
'''Christian:''' There’s not going to be any.
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Christian:  There’s not going to be any.
  
 
Nika runs the scan.
 
Nika runs the scan.
  
'''Nika:''' There’s power on board the ship.  Which is interesting.<br>
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Nika:  There’s power on board the ship.  Which is interesting.
'''Christian:''' That is interesting.  You would think that if they’re going to bother to take everything off the…the deck plating off the ship, they’d take the engine parts they can use for—<br>
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Christian:  That is interesting.  You would think that if they’re going to bother to take everything off the…the deck plating off the ship, they’d take the engine parts they can use for—
'''Rina:''' —power—<br>
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Rina: —power—
'''Christian:''' —spare engine parts.
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Christian: —spare engine parts.
  
 
As we draw nearer, we can clearly see that the stripping job was done fairly hastily.  Blow torches have left their mark, the cuts have ragged edges.  Nothing carefully disassembled here.
 
As we draw nearer, we can clearly see that the stripping job was done fairly hastily.  Blow torches have left their mark, the cuts have ragged edges.  Nothing carefully disassembled here.
  
'''Christian:''' What do you think?  Do you think someone started scavenging it and then an Alliance patrol passed close enough that they got worried about it, and took off?<br>
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Christian:  What do you think?  Do you think someone started scavenging it and then an Alliance patrol passed close enough that they got worried about it, and took off?
'''Rina:''' (quietly) I think whatever’s wrong the ship was done to it by the parties that stripped her in a hurry.<br>
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Rina: (quietly) I think whatever’s wrong the ship was done to it by the parties that stripped her in a hurry.
'''Arden:''' Is there any sort of weapon damage?  Or battle-like stuff?<br>
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Arden: Is there any sort of weapon damage?  Or battle-like stuff?
'''Nika:''' Doesn’t look like it.<br>
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Nika:  Doesn’t look like it.
'''Rina:''' Oh come on.  It’s a transport ship.  It’s not gonna have arms, anyway.<br>
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Rina:  Oh come on.  It’s a transport ship.  It’s not gonna have arms, anyway.
'''Christian:''' Yeah, but the pirates that attacked it might.<br>
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Christian: Yeah, but the pirates that attacked it might.
'''Arden:''' Trace its course backward, where did it come from?<br>
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Arden:  Trace its course backward, where did it come from?
'''Nika:''' Well it looks like it—<br>
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Nika: Well it looks like it—
'''Christian:''' Can we track it?  By this point, it’s been floating a while.<br>
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Christian:  Can we track it?  By this point, it’s been floating a while.
'''Nika:''' Let me do a scan.<br>
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Nika: Let me do a scan.
'''Arden:''' (To Christian)  Momentum.<br>
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Arden: (To Christian)  Momentum.
'''Christian:''' (To Arden) Depends.  If people been playing with it.<br>
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Christian: (To Arden) Depends.  If people been playing with it.
'''Nika:''' Huh.  I’m picking up another signal.  Faint.  Might be one of the shuttles. <br>
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Nika: Huh.  I’m picking up another signal.  Faint.  Might be one of the shuttles.
'''Christian:''' Hm.<br>
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Christian: Hm.
'''Arden:''' And….how far away?<br>
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Arden:  And….how far away?
'''Christian:''' If the ship broke down, they would have escaped in the shuttles.  Does this kind [of ship] have escape pods?  Or just shuttles?<br>
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Christian: If the ship broke down, they would have escaped in the shuttles.  Does this kind [of ship] have escape pods?  Or just shuttles?
'''Nika:''' Just the shuttles.<br>
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Nika:  Just the shuttles.
'''Christian:''' How long would the shuttle be able to survive?<br>
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Christian: How long would the shuttle be able to survive?
'''Nika:''' Well, they couldn’t make it to Beaumonde from here.<br>
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Nika:  Well, they couldn’t make it to Beaumonde from here.
'''Christian:''' Obviously.  How long would a shuttle be able to have air?  Not three weeks?<br>
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Christian:  Obviously.  How long would a shuttle be able to have air?  Not three weeks?
'''Nika:''' No. Not three weeks.
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Nika: No. Not three weeks.
  
 
Rina sighs, shaking her head.  No one on those shuttles is likely still alive.
 
Rina sighs, shaking her head.  No one on those shuttles is likely still alive.
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We refocus our attention on the ship in front of us.
 
We refocus our attention on the ship in front of us.
  
'''Arden:''' Is it possible to scan for life signs? <br>
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Arden:  Is it possible to scan for life signs?
'''Nika:''' I’m not seeing any heat traces, but I’m seeing some unusual cold traces, though.  This thing might have a cold storage unit that might still be in operation. <br>
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Nika: I’m not seeing any heat traces, but I’m seeing some unusual cold traces, though.  This thing might have a cold storage unit that might still be in operation.
'''Christian:''' Could it have been transporting…slabs of beef, for all we know?<br>
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Christian: Could it have been transporting…slabs of beef, for all we know?
'''Rina:''' Oh, please, God.  Let it be beef.<br>
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Rina: Oh, please, God.  Let it be beef.
'''Nika:''' Well, these were made for transporting livestock.<br>
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Nika:  Well, these were made for transporting livestock.
'''Christian:''' How far away is the shuttle?<br>
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Christian:  How far away is the shuttle?
'''Arden:''' If it is a shuttle.<br>
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Arden: If it is a shuttle.
'''Christian:''' If it is a shuttle. How far away?<br>
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Christian: If it is a shuttle. How far away?
'''Arden:''' That other another signature, how far away is it?<br>
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Arden: That other another signature, how far away is it?
'''Nika:''' The other signature….About an hour away.<br>
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Nika:  The other signature….About an hour away.
'''Rina:''' (sobering) What direction is the heading? Towards Beaumonde?<br>
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Rina: (sobering) What direction is the heading? Towards Beaumonde?
'''Nika:''' Roughly.  But not…not exactly.<br>
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Nika: Roughly.  But not…not exactly.
'''Arden:''' If the shuttle left here at its maximum speed, when would it have left here?<br>
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Arden: If the shuttle left here at its maximum speed, when would it have left here?
'''Nika:''' About the same time as that signal.<br>
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Nika: About the same time as that signal.
'''Arden:''' Three weeks?  Okay…<br>
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Arden: Three weeks?  Okay…
'''Nika:''' They would until they’d burned all their fuel.  They wouldn’t have enough for three weeks.  They’d have about thirty hours.
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Nika:  They would until they’d burned all their fuel.  They wouldn’t have enough for three weeks.  They’d have about thirty hours.
  
 
Anyone on that shuttle is as good as dead.  Do we go for the shuttle?  Or not?
 
Anyone on that shuttle is as good as dead.  Do we go for the shuttle?  Or not?

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