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'''Rina:''' (getting a bad feeling about this….) Aw, Christ.  All right…. <br>
 
'''Rina:''' (getting a bad feeling about this….) Aw, Christ.  All right…. <br>
'''Arden:''' Sometimes you’re the windshield, sometimes you’re the bug.<br>
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'''Arden:''' Sometimes you’re the windshield, sometimes you’re the bug.
 
'''Christian:''' Could it be that perhaps that that ship was attacked and the people tried to escape on the shuttle?  And didn’t make it very far?<br>
 
'''Christian:''' Could it be that perhaps that that ship was attacked and the people tried to escape on the shuttle?  And didn’t make it very far?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Is this where the signal’s coming from?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Is this where the signal’s coming from?<br>
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'''Christian:''' (to Rina) I’m asking the person who knows things about ships and mechanics.<br>
 
'''Christian:''' (to Rina) I’m asking the person who knows things about ships and mechanics.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (grimacing) There’s always a way.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (grimacing) There’s always a way.<br>
'''Christian:''' (waving his fingers at her) ''Go'' and find out.   
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'''Christian:''' (waving his fingers at her) Go and find out.   
  
 
'''---OOC---''' <br>
 
'''---OOC---''' <br>
 
'''Jay:''' Find out from the GM.  Don’t just assume.  This is an important clue, because if they’re insane enough to open up the hatch from the inside, something’s wrong.  I’m not going on that ship because or else, because I’m going to be “The Naked Now”.<br>
 
'''Jay:''' Find out from the GM.  Don’t just assume.  This is an important clue, because if they’re insane enough to open up the hatch from the inside, something’s wrong.  I’m not going on that ship because or else, because I’m going to be “The Naked Now”.<br>
'''Maer:''' (pained grimace) ''Ew!'' Oh, God.  Okay.  Yeah.<br>  
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'''Maer:''' (pained grimace) Ew!  Oh, God.  Okay.  Yeah.<br>  
 
'''Jay:'''  I’ve never seen someone have that bad a reaction to a Star Trek episode before.<br>
 
'''Jay:'''  I’ve never seen someone have that bad a reaction to a Star Trek episode before.<br>
 
'''Steve:''' Is this the Next Generation one? Or the original series?<br>
 
'''Steve:''' Is this the Next Generation one? Or the original series?<br>
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'''Christian:''' Good.  Just want to make sure…
 
'''Christian:''' Good.  Just want to make sure…
  
Now that we’ve got the shuttle stabilized inside and we can still communicate with the rest of the crew, we look everything over carefully.  Basically, the shuttle’s in perfect condition.  It’s even got the name ''Jian Seng'' on it, leaving no doubt as to its origins.   
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Now that we’ve got the shuttle stabilized inside and we can still communicate with the rest of the crew, we look everything over carefully.  Basically, the shuttle’s in perfect condition.  It’s even got the name Jian Seng on it, leaving no doubt as to its origins.   
  
 
Going through the lockers and storage spaces of the shuttle, nothing unusual crops up.  It’s not very personalized.  It’s got tie-downs and strapping and a huge rear hatch, leaving us to believe it was used to transport fairly large animals or cargo.  The passenger seating of the shuttle are fully foldable into the deck, as they in this instance are.
 
Going through the lockers and storage spaces of the shuttle, nothing unusual crops up.  It’s not very personalized.  It’s got tie-downs and strapping and a huge rear hatch, leaving us to believe it was used to transport fairly large animals or cargo.  The passenger seating of the shuttle are fully foldable into the deck, as they in this instance are.
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We report our findings and get the shuttle stabilized for docking.  Wonder of wonders, we actually pull it off and dock her to ''Summer’s Gift''.  When she’s secured, we hook her up with the ship’s power.  While Nika flies us back to the ''Jian Seng'', Arden gets busy booting up the shuttle’s log.  Beyond the usual navigational stuff there is only one other entry, a voice message:
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We report our findings and get the shuttle stabilized for docking.  Wonder of wonders, we actually pull it off and dock her to ''Summer’s Gift''.  When she’s secured, we hook her up with the ship’s power.  While Nika flies us back to the Jian Seng, Arden gets busy booting up the shuttle’s log.  Beyond the usual navigational stuff there is only one other entry, a voice message:
  
 
'''Man:'''  (panting)…Oh, God…They’re coming.  Whatever happened on the other shuttle…(getting a grip)  It won’t happen to us.  Goodbye, Minerva.  I love you.  
 
'''Man:'''  (panting)…Oh, God…They’re coming.  Whatever happened on the other shuttle…(getting a grip)  It won’t happen to us.  Goodbye, Minerva.  I love you.  
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Based on the carnage inside, the victims were brutally killed with hand-to-hand weapons…like knives and… Entrails and organs festoon the interior like grisly tinsel.
 
Based on the carnage inside, the victims were brutally killed with hand-to-hand weapons…like knives and… Entrails and organs festoon the interior like grisly tinsel.
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'''Christian:''' Well, I guess I can understand why he’d want to go out into space than have this happen to him.<br>  
 
'''Christian:''' Well, I guess I can understand why he’d want to go out into space than have this happen to him.<br>  
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'''Christian:''' (continuing) –that people who aren’t insane, couldn’t fake this brutality.  But I know that’s not true.  Let’s go.  I say—<br>
 
'''Christian:''' (continuing) –that people who aren’t insane, couldn’t fake this brutality.  But I know that’s not true.  Let’s go.  I say—<br>
 
'''Rina:''' We mark their positions, give up the names to the authorities so they can alert next of kin.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' We mark their positions, give up the names to the authorities so they can alert next of kin.<br>
'''Christian:''' I don’t think we need to stop at the other ship, not the main ship.<br>
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Christian:''' I don’t think we need to stop at the other ship, not the main ship.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Why? It didn’t have battle damage on it.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Why? It didn’t have battle damage on it.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Yeah….and it was scavved.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Yeah….and it was scavved.<br>
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'''Arden:''' We still don’t know what happened.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' We still don’t know what happened.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (quietly) Do we really need to know?<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (quietly) Do we really need to know?<br>
'''Arden:''' (emphatically) ''I'' do.<br>
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'''Arden:''' (emphatically) I do.<br>
 
'''Christian:''' (off Arden’s remark)  Very very very very insane very bad men came and did some very bad things for absolutely no reason whatsoever.<br>
 
'''Christian:''' (off Arden’s remark)  Very very very very insane very bad men came and did some very bad things for absolutely no reason whatsoever.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' I heard no proper nouns in there, so you don’t know either.<br><br>
 
'''Arden:''' I heard no proper nouns in there, so you don’t know either.<br><br>
 
[[Episode_4._Part_2|part 2]]
 
[[Episode_4._Part_2|part 2]]

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