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True believer?  More than Mike?  Rina knows she isn’t but what did she do to convince him that she was?  Where did everything get so wrong?<br><br>
 
True believer?  More than Mike?  Rina knows she isn’t but what did she do to convince him that she was?  Where did everything get so wrong?<br><br>
  
'''Mike:''' This isn’t your fault. Don’t think I’m bluffing, but … this is what I am. (a long beat) That said, if this—all that you see—doesn’t go to hell, and things don’t end up in the worst possible situation … it may be that there is time for redemption.<br>
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'''Mike:''' This isn’t your fault. Don’t think I’m bluffing, but … this is what I am. (a long beat) That said, if this—all that you see—doesn’t go to hell, and things don’t end up in the worst possible situation … it may be that there is time for redemption.<br><br>
'''Rina:''' Seems to me that … dying at this juncture … might actually be shortchanging the redemption you could be doing. But I’m not … the right person to judge that sort of thing.<br>  
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'''Rina:''' Seems to me that … dying at this juncture … might actually be shortchanging the redemption you could be doing. But I’m not … the right person to judge that sort of thing.<br><br>  
'''Mike:''' Well, you’re going to have to make that judgment.  If it comes to that.  Perhaps the good people of Highgate will take that decision out of our hands.  (another shrug) Or perhaps they won’t.<br>
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'''Mike:''' Well, you’re going to have to make that judgment.  If it comes to that.  Perhaps the good people of Highgate will take that decision out of our hands.  (another shrug) Or perhaps they won’t.<br><br>
'''Rina:''' So. You are going through this to atone.  Is that right?<br>
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'''Rina:''' So. You are going through this to atone.  Is that right?<br><br>
 
'''Mike:''' I ''went'' through this to atone. Not to God. ''That'' I still have some atoning to do. (a beat) I was a marked man. In theory, this should remove that mark.  I may have a new mark … But I couldn’t head off somewhere, with a side arm and with you by my side thinking that the next assassin or bounty hunter is not going to work.  Or the one after that.  It had to end.<br>   
 
'''Mike:''' I ''went'' through this to atone. Not to God. ''That'' I still have some atoning to do. (a beat) I was a marked man. In theory, this should remove that mark.  I may have a new mark … But I couldn’t head off somewhere, with a side arm and with you by my side thinking that the next assassin or bounty hunter is not going to work.  Or the one after that.  It had to end.<br>   
 
'''Rina:''' I thought the plan was to go somewhere where they wouldn’t come after you.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' I thought the plan was to go somewhere where they wouldn’t come after you.<br>
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'''Rina:''' You really set on this course?<br>
 
'''Rina:''' You really set on this course?<br>
 
'''Mike:''' What’s my alternative at this stage? (laughs) Do you really have a back-up plan? I didn’t really fix a back-up plan on this one.<br>
 
'''Mike:''' What’s my alternative at this stage? (laughs) Do you really have a back-up plan? I didn’t really fix a back-up plan on this one.<br>
'''Rina:''' (agreeing) No. No, you refused representation.  ''Like an '''idiot'''''. No, that suggested to me you did not have a back-up plan.<br>
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'''Rina:''' (agreeing) No. No, you refused representation.  ''Like an '''idiot''''. No, that suggested to me you did not have a back-up plan.<br>
'''Mike:''' Representation would not benefit me at this stage. I can’t serve them and antagonize them at the same time.<br><br>
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'''Mike:''' Representation would not benefit me at this stage. I can’t serve them and antagonize them at the same time.<br>
  
 
What the hell is that supposed to mean?  Rina wants to ask him further but it’s too much to take in.<br><br>
 
What the hell is that supposed to mean?  Rina wants to ask him further but it’s too much to take in.<br><br>
  
 
'''Rina:''' All right. Is there anything you want me to do? <br>
 
'''Rina:''' All right. Is there anything you want me to do? <br>
'''Mike:''' (breathes a laugh) Um … Don’t get captured by … (nods at the Feds all around)<br>
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'''Mike:''' (breathes a laugh) Um … Don’t get captured by … (nods at the Feds all around)
'''Rina:''' It’s a little late for that, don’t you think?<br>
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'''Rina:''' It’s a little late for that, don’t you think?
'''Mike:''' I was told you wouldn’t be detained.  For long. (a beat) What is ''your'' plan? Tell me that.<br>
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'''Mike:''' I was told you wouldn’t be detained.  For long. (a beat) What is ''your'' plan? Tell me that.
'''Rina:''' It changes by the second.  Right now?  It’s to keep myself together.  Five minutes from now? Hopefully, to walk out of here without killing anybody.<br>
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'''Rina:''' It changes by the second.  Right now?  It’s to keep myself together.  Five minutes from now? Hopefully, to walk out of here without killing anybody.
 
'''Mike:''' Okay.  Well maybe before, you know, you condemn me for my lack of back-up plan, you might want to have a primary plan.<br><br>  
 
'''Mike:''' Okay.  Well maybe before, you know, you condemn me for my lack of back-up plan, you might want to have a primary plan.<br><br>  
  
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'''Tanner:''' Let’s see… He says that he got some intelligence that you’re part of a job moving—trying to capture Reavers on an Alliance cruiser.<br>
 
'''Tanner:''' Let’s see… He says that he got some intelligence that you’re part of a job moving—trying to capture Reavers on an Alliance cruiser.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Oookay.  I’m not sure where you’re going with this.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Oookay.  I’m not sure where you’re going with this.<br>
'''Tanner:''' Well he says you’re part of a program to produce some sort of mole/chameleon type people.  It’s his odd claim and I’m not sure what his gambit is here.<br><br>
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'''Tanner:''' Well he says you’re part of a program to produce some sort of mole/chameleon type people.  It’s his odd claim and I’m not sure what his gambit is here.<br>
  
 
Oh ''tah ma de''.  Really?  He said that?  Joshua keeps it together, plays along with Tanner for more information.<br><br>
 
Oh ''tah ma de''.  Really?  He said that?  Joshua keeps it together, plays along with Tanner for more information.<br><br>
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'''Joshua:'''  You mean, to her?<br>
 
'''Joshua:'''  You mean, to her?<br>
 
'''Tanner:''' What he’s said there and what he said to me is more than he’s said since we’ve apprehended him. Now, this could be the ravings of a madman but he seemed concerned. But you’re denying this?<br>
 
'''Tanner:''' What he’s said there and what he said to me is more than he’s said since we’ve apprehended him. Now, this could be the ravings of a madman but he seemed concerned. But you’re denying this?<br>
'''Joshua:''' I am certainly denying this.  I still don’t quite get where … I mean, Blue Sun? I don’t know Mike very well but he—<br>
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'''Joshua:''' I am certainly denying this.  I still don’t quite get where … I mean, Blue Sun? I don’t know Mike very well but he—
 
'''Tanner:''' He suggested we do a … a scan of you.<br>
 
'''Tanner:''' He suggested we do a … a scan of you.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' What kind of ''scan'' are we talking about here?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' What kind of ''scan'' are we talking about here?<br>
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'''Joshua:''' I think it’s certainly unnecessary and I’m not particularly fond of my privacy being invaded that way. I mean, ''brain scan''? I mean, really? I mean … really? If … he accused you of this would you consent to a brain scan? I mean, it’s just … wrong. It strikes me as … I …<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I think it’s certainly unnecessary and I’m not particularly fond of my privacy being invaded that way. I mean, ''brain scan''? I mean, really? I mean … really? If … he accused you of this would you consent to a brain scan? I mean, it’s just … wrong. It strikes me as … I …<br>
 
'''Tanner:''' Do you think you’d be a harmed by a brain scan?<br>
 
'''Tanner:''' Do you think you’d be a harmed by a brain scan?<br>
'''Joshua:''' I don’t know. I’m not a ''doctor''. It’s possible. But on principle, ''hell no'' I don’t want to get a brain scan, harm or not. Are you one of these Browncoat fellahs, is that how it works? I don’t know a lot about what’s going on but isn’t that supposed to be the whole freedom to do what you want without the Man coming down on you and scanning your brain every time you turn around?<br>
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'''Joshua:''' I don’t know. I’m not a ''doctor''. It’s possible. But on principle, ''hell no'' I don’t want to get a brain scan, harm or not. Are you one of these Browncoat fellahs, is that how it works? I don’t know a lot about what’s going on but isn’t that supposed to be the whole freedom to do what you want without the Man coming down on you and scanning your brain every time you turn around?
 
'''Tanner:''' Well if I were a Browncoat and I thought an agent of Blue Sun was trying to infiltrate my facility to kill off a star witness or cause other mayhem, then that might make me a little concerned.<br><br>
 
'''Tanner:''' Well if I were a Browncoat and I thought an agent of Blue Sun was trying to infiltrate my facility to kill off a star witness or cause other mayhem, then that might make me a little concerned.<br><br>
  

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