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'''Kramer:''' Well, I can tell you this much. Carter is being held in some sort of underground  medical facility on Highgate. I didn’t even know they had underground medical facilities on Highgate, but it’s tied to the main army base down there.<br><br>
 
'''Kramer:''' Well, I can tell you this much. Carter is being held in some sort of underground  medical facility on Highgate. I didn’t even know they had underground medical facilities on Highgate, but it’s tied to the main army base down there.<br><br>
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Nika and Rina take that in and trade a single look.<br><br>
 
Nika and Rina take that in and trade a single look.<br><br>
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'''Kramer:''' He had many of us believing that … he had … run afoul of Nguyen, which is why I think You Ge thought he was not an agent of Nguyen. He’d done a pretty good job of getting captured by Nguyen, allegedly doing things that Nguyen would be unhappy about.  And this is somewhat classified, but you may know that Nguyen had a contract on him, in part to satisfy the demands of other factions that were out there who hadlost personnel in addition to the ones that Nguyen lost when Carter revealed his intelligence. Which apparently was quite extensive.<br><br>
 
'''Kramer:''' He had many of us believing that … he had … run afoul of Nguyen, which is why I think You Ge thought he was not an agent of Nguyen. He’d done a pretty good job of getting captured by Nguyen, allegedly doing things that Nguyen would be unhappy about.  And this is somewhat classified, but you may know that Nguyen had a contract on him, in part to satisfy the demands of other factions that were out there who hadlost personnel in addition to the ones that Nguyen lost when Carter revealed his intelligence. Which apparently was quite extensive.<br><br>
  
By Mike’s own admission to Rina, thirty five sleeper agents lost their lives.  And those were merely the deaths the intelligence community was able to confirm.<br><br>
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By '''Mike:'''’s own admission to '''Rina:''', thirty five sleeper agents lost their lives.  And those were merely the deaths the intelligence community was able to confirm.<br><br>
  
 
'''Nika:''' There’s certainly a whole lotta pissed-off between the two of them.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' There’s certainly a whole lotta pissed-off between the two of them.<br>
 
'''Kramer:''' (going carefully) Well, there was some … yeah, well I think that there was some concern that … that this … It really altered the battle plan for Nguyen.  It flushed him out into the open which he wasn’t happy with. He spent pretty much since the War carefully building a network of considerable intelligence and preparedness to do a major strike against the Alliance, but it became impossible based on the information that Carter revealed. (a beat) Now to be fair, if you put all your eggs in one basket, you should certainly expects something like this to happen.<br><br>
 
'''Kramer:''' (going carefully) Well, there was some … yeah, well I think that there was some concern that … that this … It really altered the battle plan for Nguyen.  It flushed him out into the open which he wasn’t happy with. He spent pretty much since the War carefully building a network of considerable intelligence and preparedness to do a major strike against the Alliance, but it became impossible based on the information that Carter revealed. (a beat) Now to be fair, if you put all your eggs in one basket, you should certainly expects something like this to happen.<br><br>
  
As Nika, Rina and Arden already know, Nguyen had run a cover operation on Beaumonde, the Cordon Vert school, a culinary institute that trained chefs for high profile positions in government and amongst those who could pay for their caliber.  Chefs who were also Nguyen’s intelligence agents.  We found out about the set-up when Nguyen hired us for the Chempliant factory job… and it was also during that job that we encountered Carter and lost him to the Feds.<br><br>
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As Nika, '''Rina:''' and Arden already know, Nguyen had run a cover operation on Beaumonde, the Cordon Vert school, a culinary institute that trained chefs for high profile positions in government and amongst those who could pay for their caliber.  Chefs who were also Nguyen’s intelligence agents.  We found out about the set-up when Nguyen hired us for the Chempliant factory job… and it was also during that job that we encountered Carter and lost him to the Feds.<br><br>
  
 
'''Rina:''': Were any of the thirty-five killed ''chefs''?<br>
 
'''Rina:''': Were any of the thirty-five killed ''chefs''?<br>
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True enough.<br><br>
 
True enough.<br><br>
  
'''Kiera:''' How likely is it that this Mike person would’ve actually cultivated the fight with Nguyen, exposed the network to rout out people that were actually had infiltrated the network form the other side. So it cleared out his network and effectively got rid of it. And then set it up that he could basically have this and eventually out of the kindness of his heart, say, in the new republic or the new government that the first thing Nguyen should have is … you know …<br>
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'''Kiera:''' How likely is it that this '''Mike:''' person would’ve actually cultivated the fight with Nguyen, exposed the network to rout out people that were actually had infiltrated the network form the other side. So it cleared out his network and effectively got rid of it. And then set it up that he could basically have this and eventually out of the kindness of his heart, say, in the new republic or the new government that the first thing Nguyen should have is … you know …<br>
'''Kramer:''' (wryly) You’re friends with Rina, aren’t you?<br><br>
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'''Kramer:''' (wryly) You’re friends with '''Rina:''', aren’t you?<br><br>
  
 
Snorts and chuckles all around on that one.<br>
 
Snorts and chuckles all around on that one.<br>
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True enough.<br>
 
True enough.<br>
  
'''Joshua:''' So if the PDF’s in control of Mike’s custody, what would have to be done if we wanted to get Rina to be able to see him before the trial?<br>
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'''Joshua:''' So if the PDF’s in control of '''Mike:'''’s custody, what would have to be done if we wanted to get '''Rina:''' to be able to see him before the trial?<br>
 
'''Kramer:''' Before the trial? Well, I suppose you could ask to.<br>
 
'''Kramer:''' Before the trial? Well, I suppose you could ask to.<br>
 
'''Rina:''': (to Joshua) Is that really a good idea?<br>
 
'''Rina:''': (to Joshua) Is that really a good idea?<br>
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'''Kramer:''' Yes.  You can petition.  Here’s the thing: He’s refused counsel. However, if you were to say you were friends of his my concern is not much for his case or for my reputation as much as the spotlight it will put on ''you''.<br><br>  
 
'''Kramer:''' Yes.  You can petition.  Here’s the thing: He’s refused counsel. However, if you were to say you were friends of his my concern is not much for his case or for my reputation as much as the spotlight it will put on ''you''.<br><br>  
  
She’s looking right at Rina when she says it but she means everyone in our party.<br><br>
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She’s looking right at '''Rina:''' when she says it but she means everyone in our party.<br><br>
  
 
'''Kramer:''' If you go to speak with him you will definitely be—<br>
 
'''Kramer:''' If you go to speak with him you will definitely be—<br>

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