Editing Episode 415: Entanglements, Part Two

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On the bridge, Nika’s been surreptitiously following the women’s suit chatter and cuts a look at Joshua in the copilot’s seat.  She doesn’t say a word to him about what’s happening outside.<br><br>   
 
On the bridge, Nika’s been surreptitiously following the women’s suit chatter and cuts a look at Joshua in the copilot’s seat.  She doesn’t say a word to him about what’s happening outside.<br><br>   
  
Flying farther from the ship with every second, Rina rapidly goes through her options.  The list is short.  She can either open the oxy recharge valve on her suit and hope there is enough pressure remaining in her depleted air supply to propel her back to the ''Gift''—and that’s assuming she hits the release on the right degree of arc in her spin to point her in the right direction—or she can pray that Kiera has enough air to push after her and grab her before she goes beyond the limit of Kiera’s tether. <br><br>  
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Flying farther from the ship with every second, Rina rapidly goes through her options.  The list is short.  She can either open the oxy recharge valve on her suit and hope there is enough pressure remaining in her depleted air supply to propel her back to the Gift—and that’s assuming she hits the release on the right degree of arc in her spin to point her in the right direction—or she can pray that Kiera has enough air to push after her and grab her before she goes beyond the limit of Kiera’s tether. <br><br>  
  
 
At the airlock, Kiera curses and makes good on her bantering.<br><br>
 
At the airlock, Kiera curses and makes good on her bantering.<br><br>

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