Editing Episode 416: Miranda Calling, Part Two

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'''Rina:''' (whispers) Damn you.  (louder) All right. Let’s see ...<br><br>
 
'''Rina:''' (whispers) Damn you.  (louder) All right. Let’s see ...<br><br>
  
She stows her gun, steps up to the doors, and starts pulling her tools from her pockets. She gets the doors open and a gust of stale malodorous air hits their faces. The doors are stiff and as they muscle them aside, the rocking of the car sends some of the bodies falling to the floor.  Joshua feels drawn to the rear of the car where it’s still covered by the subway tunnel and Rina moves with him, praying that nothing inside the car is playing possum.<br><br>  
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She stows her gun, steps up to the doors, and starts pulling her tools from her pockets. She gets the doors open and a gust of stale malodorous air hits their faces. The doors are stiff and as they muscle them aside, the rocking of the car sends some of the bodies falling to the floor.  Joshua feels compelled to the rear of the car where it’s still covered by the subway tunnel and Rina moves with him, praying that nothing inside the car is playing possum.<br><br>  
  
 
'''Joshua:''' You can stay up here if you’d—<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' You can stay up here if you’d—<br>

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