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'''Joshua:''' (to self) It was such a nice dream …<br><br>  
 
'''Joshua:''' (to self) It was such a nice dream …<br><br>  
  
Those of us who’ve been asleep find our wounds and assorted hurts have pretty much healed up in the interim but none of us feel at our best.  We’re all groggy, gritty-eyed, grouchy, twitchy, and our mouths feel and taste like we’ve been sucking on the same dirty wool sock for a week.<br><br>
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Those of us who’ve been asleep find our wounds and assorted hurts have pretty much healed up in the interim but none of us feel well rested.  We’re all groggy, gritty-eyed, grouchy, twitchy, and our mouths feel and taste like we’ve been sucking on the same dirty wool sock for a week.<br><br>
  
 
'''Nika:''' I’m gonna catch a shower.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' I’m gonna catch a shower.<br>

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