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It takes us two days to unload everything without power to assist us. While strictly speaking nothing is wrong with that, it does make us linger longer than a kiss-and-go would have taken us with the power on.  More time on the ground translates into a greater chance of being discovered.  Dean’s people are obedient and hard workers and there are nine of them.  Combined with our hands, we’ve got over a dozen people working on it.<br><br>
 
It takes us two days to unload everything without power to assist us. While strictly speaking nothing is wrong with that, it does make us linger longer than a kiss-and-go would have taken us with the power on.  More time on the ground translates into a greater chance of being discovered.  Dean’s people are obedient and hard workers and there are nine of them.  Combined with our hands, we’ve got over a dozen people working on it.<br><br>
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The second day of unloading, he notices something odd.  The Lambs are breaking things down and reorganizing and repacking their supplies, and doing it fairly energetically at that. Nika, Joshua, and Rina, however, slow down their pace as time goes on until finally they’re starting to stare off into the distance while engaged in a task.  Or they’d pick up a box, carry it a few steps and then put it down.  Nothing zombified or anything, just … overly casual about it all.  Our crew isn’t what you’d call lazy and certainly Rina isn’t a take-your-time kinda gal.  And there she is, staring off thataway with box in hand and going nowhere fast.  Kiera’s sitting on a crate nearby and Arden asks Kiera her opinion on the whole business.  Her response is a shrug and a whatever.<br><br>   
 
The second day of unloading, he notices something odd.  The Lambs are breaking things down and reorganizing and repacking their supplies, and doing it fairly energetically at that. Nika, Joshua, and Rina, however, slow down their pace as time goes on until finally they’re starting to stare off into the distance while engaged in a task.  Or they’d pick up a box, carry it a few steps and then put it down.  Nothing zombified or anything, just … overly casual about it all.  Our crew isn’t what you’d call lazy and certainly Rina isn’t a take-your-time kinda gal.  And there she is, staring off thataway with box in hand and going nowhere fast.  Kiera’s sitting on a crate nearby and Arden asks Kiera her opinion on the whole business.  Her response is a shrug and a whatever.<br><br>   

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