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Kiera lays down her rifle and slowly the rest of the crew does the same. Rina gives up her weapons one by one: scalpels, hemostats, everything else she’s managed to scrounge …  ''Serenity''’s crew follows suit.<br><br>
 
Kiera lays down her rifle and slowly the rest of the crew does the same. Rina gives up her weapons one by one: scalpels, hemostats, everything else she’s managed to scrounge …  ''Serenity''’s crew follows suit.<br><br>
  
'''The Operative:''' Step back to the other side of the room, please.<br><br>
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The Operative: Step back to the other side of the room, please.<br><br>
  
 
Everyone moves back.<br><br>
 
Everyone moves back.<br><br>
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'''The Operative:'''  If you wanted to keep them secure, you should have used a multilevel encryption algorithm instead of the simple one that you used. Any moron could hack that system.<br><br>
 
'''The Operative:'''  If you wanted to keep them secure, you should have used a multilevel encryption algorithm instead of the simple one that you used. Any moron could hack that system.<br><br>
  
''Moron?'' River bites her lip and keeps what she thinks behind her teeth, but you can see she doesn’t like being insulted.<br><br>
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Moron? River bites her lip and keeps what she thinks behind her teeth, but you can see she doesn’t like being insulted.<br><br>
  
 
'''The Operative:'''  Then you came here.  Where is the Director?<br>
 
'''The Operative:'''  Then you came here.  Where is the Director?<br>

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