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'''Arden:''' Is that smoke coming out of his ears?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Is that smoke coming out of his ears?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' (to the plexi) Beggar.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' (to the plexi) Beggar.<br>
'''Beglan:''' Yes?<br>
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''Beglan:''' Yes?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' If we manage to overpower the guards and get out of here … (turns to Beglan) … Joshua is your priority. Get to him and both of you move.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' If we manage to overpower the guards and get out of here … (turns to Beglan) … Joshua is your priority. Get to him and both of you move.<br>
'''Beglan:''' All right.<br><br>  
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''Beglan:''' All right.<br><br>  
  
 
There is a groan behind them. Nika adds:<br><br>
 
There is a groan behind them. Nika adds:<br><br>
  
 
'''Nika:''' That's assuming he's still unconscious. (turns to Joshua's cell) If he's actually awake …<br>
 
'''Nika:''' That's assuming he's still unconscious. (turns to Joshua's cell) If he's actually awake …<br>
'''Beglan:''' Then he's not my priority. (breathes a laugh) You're all my priority, Captain.<br><br>
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''Beglan:''' Then he's not my priority. (breathes a laugh) You're all my priority, Captain.<br><br>
  
 
Nika eyes the guards talking to their supervisor at Joshua's cell door.<br><br>
 
Nika eyes the guards talking to their supervisor at Joshua's cell door.<br><br>
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The two Feds in the cell next door, she means. She pushes Beglan for the door out and he squeezes through into the hallway. He goes to the next cell over and slaps the plexi, his brogue out in force.<br><br>
 
The two Feds in the cell next door, she means. She pushes Beglan for the door out and he squeezes through into the hallway. He goes to the next cell over and slaps the plexi, his brogue out in force.<br><br>
  
'''Beglan:''' Move back, yeh fools!<br><br>
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''Beglan:''' Move back, yeh fools!<br><br>
  
 
And Beglan starts hauling on their door and kicking it. He manages to get that door open and he starts urging the men inside to move their bloody arses. <br><br>
 
And Beglan starts hauling on their door and kicking it. He manages to get that door open and he starts urging the men inside to move their bloody arses. <br><br>

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